Copywriters Forum

Hi Liam (or Suzanne?) Welcome to the forums... The emails look OK except for one major issue. You need to show a bit more confidence and stop being so apologetic. The first email looks good. You start out by complimenting them, to build rapport, and then you offer them something of value. But... The...

Hey eldorian, Welcome to the forum! I believe only you can tell you what's right for you. But since you asked for opinions, I'll give you mine... As far as learning copywriting, I say you should give it a try and see if it clicks for you. What's the worst thing that could happen? You could learn a n...

Hey i am looking for a subject line for the following two cold emails (for both the same). I already have a few approaches here and would like to test 2-4 but which ones or are there better ones? Idea 1: Something for you (first name) Idea 2: Enjoyed your video on [Topic] Idea 3: Hey [name] thought...

It's not bad for a first try, Spyros. Unfortunately you lost my attention at the first sentence because my answer is no, I've never fantasized what it’s like to be a barista. So my first thought would be "I guess you must be talking to someone else", and I'd click away from that sales page...

Why not do both... When a prospective client asks to see your portfolio send them a link to your google drive, and a link to download the PDF. This way they can choose the one they want. As a prospective client it would impress me more to see you put in the extra effort of giving me options, and giv...

Like I said, it looks pretty good. A couple things that popped out at me are near the end of the copy... Where you say "Imagine having to brag to your friends and family that you get to drink immensely cheap, but high quality coffees for as long as you wish" Change the word "having&qu...

It looks pretty good Zak, Of course like most copy it can be tightened up a bit. But overall it's welcoming and it gives a nice discount incentive to get that first sale rolling. I have a couple suggestions but first a quick question...Is this for an actual promotion or is just for practice? All the...

Joh wrote: ↑May 1st, 2024, 5:00 pm Hello I'm a proficient writer looking for the best companies to express my writing. I've written several books and smaller form of art. I can help create any visual through writing.

Can you elaborate on this?

Hello Bopdodebop, welcome to the forums. Don't beat yourself up about it. Yes, 8 hours to write 4 emails is a crazy long time, but you're just starting out and still learning. And yes, you will get faster. Once you know your market better you can cut your research time dramatically because you'll al...

Hello everyone, I'm really lost, I don't know where to start to learn copywriting. I've heard that books are the best way to learn but I don't know which book to read to learn MAINLY copywriting and not psychology and all that. If you have suggestions for books that I could read or free training co...

I'll add to this... The benefit of specializing in one niche is that once you know the niche it can cut your research time significantly because you will already know the audience, product, and competition intimately. Another benefit of specializing is, if you're looking for clients, it helps you ge...

roark wrote: ↑October 31st, 2023, 10:32 pm This forum reminds me of the good ol' days of the internet

That's probably because I was old when we built it.
At least old enough to remember the good ol' days

Welcome to the community Dane. Feel free to have a look around and let us know if you have any questions. I've never heard of Dan Koe before but if you recommend him, I'll go check him out. Thanks. All the best, Steve My name is Dane Bentley. I got into copywriting last year and have been improving ...

Hi Ifunanya Vivian, Welcome to the copywriters forum. I'm super happy to have another direct response copywriter join us. And I'm looking forward to connecting with you. All the best, Steve Hi everyone, I am Ifunanya Vivian, a copywriter specializing in direct response and email marketing. I am new ...

Hello Mahmoud, Welcome to the copywriters forum. Yes, copywriting is a great skill to learn. Whether you're selling something, or just want to communicate a clear message to other people, copywriting can help you in many aspects of life. As far as finding a purpose to be human? I think that's a pers...

We had a request from a new member to add some plagiarism checkers to the site. For content writing? I personally don't use them too much because I write my own stuff. But here is one I've used before, and the free version seems good. Here's the link... https://www.quetext.com/ If you have any other...

Congratulations on your first assignment. The first time is always exciting, and a bit scary. Will it work? Will it not work? Will I be a hero, or a zero? Personally, I think your copy looks pretty good, Jones. Of course I don't know anything about the bodybuilding market, but I do know a bit about ...

Hello again! I've spent few hours yesterday on doing market research for one River Cruise companies. I'm in the industry for as long as four and half years and I know some things about them, but when it comes to something like this I have no idea if it's correct. I will attach the Market Research h...

I haven't sent many, just 2 until now, I started to do this few days ago, and between my work and taking the copywriting course, I had time to rewrite 2 copies and send them. OK, you're off to a start. You have an upwork profile... you joined this forum... and you sent out your first emails. That's...

Social media can be a very useful tool, I know, but I don’t really want to be thinking everyday about “Oh! What topic should I write about today?” As a person I speak a lot (and think a lot too), and I like to write (by hand mainly), but when it comes to creating a topic on some social media, my he...