Copywriters Forum

It's good for your first try. Keep practicing and you'll get better.
Remember that email marketing is not a one-and-done proposition, it's about building trust and it takes multiple emails before people feel like they know you enough to trust you.

-F

Hi Erik, and welcome to the copywriters forum. I just took a look at your copy and it looks OK. It's friendly enough, it talks a little about your struggle (to show empathy with the reader), and it moves towards a solution. So that's all good. If I had one critique... ...It's actually more of an obs...