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by LucasCepeda
May 24th, 2024, 10:45 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Clicker Email Top 10 CB Offer (Feedback)
Replies: 0
Views: 13931

Clicker Email Top 10 CB Offer (Feedback)

Hi guys and girls! I hope it's ok for me to keep posting my work here. If it's becoming too much (admin) let me know. Today I wrote another promo swipe for a top 10 clickbank offer. It's a clicker email. Any thoughts? SL: This "SN Mix" In Your Soup Melted 12.2 Pounds Of FAT In Just 7 Days ...
by LucasCepeda
May 23rd, 2024, 5:29 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Clickbank Weight Loss Offer For Men Email (Feedback appreciated)
Replies: 0
Views: 11856

Clickbank Weight Loss Offer For Men Email (Feedback appreciated)

Hi guys, I will keep trying to see if i can get some feedback on my copy. I am writing everyday as you see and trying to become better. This time I wrote for another top 10 clickbank offer in the weight loss niche. From:Men In Charge SL: From the 98% to the top 2% (Here’s how YOU belong to the winni...
by LucasCepeda
May 22nd, 2024, 10:09 am
Forum: Email Copywriting
Topic: Copy Analysis - How to write to get better response.
Replies: 0
Views: 7203

Copy Analysis - How to write to get better response.

Hi guys. I hope this is the right place to post this. I just analyzed a "better than good" email in the adult erection problem market and wrote my view on why the copy is so compelling. I am attaching the email as a pdf with my notes if you are interested. I think if you are a beginner cop...
by LucasCepeda
May 21st, 2024, 9:37 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: PaleoHacks Promo - 21 day keto challenge Email (feedback)
Replies: 0
Views: 7707

PaleoHacks Promo - 21 day keto challenge Email (feedback)

Paleo Hacks Promo Email: Market Aware Customers. 21 Day Keto Challenge Link: https://mypaleorecipe.com/ketochallenge-ia?tid=102130cb5c5c31654ec5d886027428&aff_id=1000&mpcampaignid={mpcampaignid}&offer_id=10&source=&aff_sub=ketochallengetxt&sl=tune21dayketochallenge1000&cl...
by LucasCepeda
May 20th, 2024, 3:09 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Financial Copy - Story Email Promo
Replies: 0
Views: 8123

Financial Copy - Story Email Promo

Financial Promo:Joel Litman Fraud And Scamers Promo URL: https://secure.altimetry.com/?cid=MKT801804&eid=MKT804889&step=start&plcid=PLC208986&SNAID=SAC0017007240&encryptedSnaid=fgZM2fnc7DSp2W3xPcLiLVuHJ5bgAEEzqif5Ok1viVo%3D&emailjobid=5502633&emailname=2024-0519-HDN-Dedic...
by LucasCepeda
May 19th, 2024, 10:17 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Stansberry Research Financial Promo Email
Replies: 0
Views: 7769

Stansberry Research Financial Promo Email

Niche: Financial Promo - Stansberry Research For context this is the offer: https://orders.stansberryresearch.com/?cid=MKT803554&eid=MKT804666&step=start&plcid=PLC208858&SNAID=SAC0017007240&encryptedSnaid=fgZM2fnc7DSp2W3xPcLiLVuHJ5bgAEEzqif5Ok1viVo%3D&emailjobid=5502080&e...
by LucasCepeda
May 18th, 2024, 9:46 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: [Critique Needed] Ad copy for web design agency
Replies: 2
Views: 11153

Re: [Critique Needed] Ad copy for web design agency

Hi there Congratz on your facebook ad copy. I would like to give you my two cents, you can do what you like with it. This is just my feedback: I think the offer its scattered and its trying to reach to many different market segments. Do you want clients that want to seem more credible? Or clients th...
by LucasCepeda
May 18th, 2024, 9:24 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Feedback on vsl script
Replies: 1
Views: 6721

Re: Feedback on vsl script

Hey there I like your writing. But I would maybe do a few changes to that first intro paragraph instead of going directly to the financial reset part maybe? This is what you wrote: Imagine the most colossal financial reset in history is in progress. We’re feeling it as rising prices at the grocery s...
by LucasCepeda
May 17th, 2024, 10:02 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Writers, critique this direct email copy!
Replies: 2
Views: 8325

Re: Writers, critique this direct email copy!

Hey I am not a pro copywriter so I can't give you the best tips on how to write amazing copy but I can give you some other tips. 1- Make your sentences shorter so they are easier to read. 2- Be more precise. Is it for women? Maybe you can talk about a specific event instead of making it to general. ...
by LucasCepeda
May 17th, 2024, 9:38 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: REQUEST FOR COPY FEEDBACK - Financial Promo Email
Replies: 0
Views: 7943

REQUEST FOR COPY FEEDBACK - Financial Promo Email

Hi guys, Lucas Cepeda here. It's friday night in zurich. I am on my bed with my laptop on my lap writing some copy. I would appreciate your reviews. The promo is for a promotion from stansberry research (one of agoras brand) This is the offer: https://orders.stansberryresearch.com/?cid=MKT803554&...
by LucasCepeda
May 11th, 2024, 9:12 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Hello from Zurich, Switzerland!
Replies: 4
Views: 10980

Re: Hello from Zurich, Switzerland!

Thank you SARubin, appreciated!
by LucasCepeda
May 7th, 2024, 6:26 pm
Forum: Email Copywriting
Topic: Do you need help with your emails? I would love to help for FREE
Replies: 0
Views: 9059

Do you need help with your emails? I would love to help for FREE

Hi there My name is lucas cepeda. I have a proposition to help some copywriters with their emails. I am not looking to get paid. I am just looking to get some feedback and maybe use that feedback later on if I decide to do some freelancing offering email writing. I can write short, punchy copy that ...
by LucasCepeda
May 7th, 2024, 6:13 pm
Forum: Beginners Area
Topic: Feedback Appreciated!
Replies: 2
Views: 7015

Re: Feedback Appreciated!

Hello again Franklin!

Thank you.

Again, I was just wondering again if my writing skills are any good or I should go to programming instead jajaja...

Sincerely
Lucas
by LucasCepeda
May 7th, 2024, 6:11 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Hello from Zurich, Switzerland!
Replies: 4
Views: 10980

Re: Hello from Zurich, Switzerland!

Hi Franklin!

Thank you.
Wish you a great day/afternoon!

Cheers
Lucas
by LucasCepeda
May 7th, 2024, 5:26 pm
Forum: Beginners Area
Topic: Feedback Appreciated!
Replies: 2
Views: 7015

Feedback Appreciated!

Hi everyone I just joined the forum hoping to learn a ton from all the valuable threads I have already seen posted here. I have recently started writing on my own to see if I my writing has any potential. I decided to maybe become a writer in the financial market and was wondering if anyone could gi...
by LucasCepeda
May 7th, 2024, 5:08 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Hello from Zurich, Switzerland!
Replies: 4
Views: 10980

Hello from Zurich, Switzerland!

Hi everyone! My name is Lucas Cepeda. I have been marketing online for over 15 years. I have experience in digital products and affiliate marketing and have used paid traffic as well as other traffic methods. Recently I have decided to delve into copywriting. I have read many books about the topic a...