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- May 24th, 2024, 10:45 am
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: Clicker Email Top 10 CB Offer (Feedback)
- Replies: 0
- Views: 13931
Clicker Email Top 10 CB Offer (Feedback)
Hi guys and girls! I hope it's ok for me to keep posting my work here. If it's becoming too much (admin) let me know. Today I wrote another promo swipe for a top 10 clickbank offer. It's a clicker email. Any thoughts? SL: This "SN Mix" In Your Soup Melted 12.2 Pounds Of FAT In Just 7 Days ...
- May 23rd, 2024, 5:29 pm
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: Clickbank Weight Loss Offer For Men Email (Feedback appreciated)
- Replies: 0
- Views: 11856
Clickbank Weight Loss Offer For Men Email (Feedback appreciated)
Hi guys, I will keep trying to see if i can get some feedback on my copy. I am writing everyday as you see and trying to become better. This time I wrote for another top 10 clickbank offer in the weight loss niche. From:Men In Charge SL: From the 98% to the top 2% (Here’s how YOU belong to the winni...
- May 22nd, 2024, 10:09 am
- Forum: Email Copywriting
- Topic: Copy Analysis - How to write to get better response.
- Replies: 0
- Views: 7203
Copy Analysis - How to write to get better response.
Hi guys. I hope this is the right place to post this. I just analyzed a "better than good" email in the adult erection problem market and wrote my view on why the copy is so compelling. I am attaching the email as a pdf with my notes if you are interested. I think if you are a beginner cop...
- May 21st, 2024, 9:37 am
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: PaleoHacks Promo - 21 day keto challenge Email (feedback)
- Replies: 0
- Views: 7707
PaleoHacks Promo - 21 day keto challenge Email (feedback)
Paleo Hacks Promo Email: Market Aware Customers. 21 Day Keto Challenge Link: https://mypaleorecipe.com/ketochallenge-ia?tid=102130cb5c5c31654ec5d886027428&aff_id=1000&mpcampaignid={mpcampaignid}&offer_id=10&source=&aff_sub=ketochallengetxt&sl=tune21dayketochallenge1000&cl...
- May 20th, 2024, 3:09 pm
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: Financial Copy - Story Email Promo
- Replies: 0
- Views: 8123
Financial Copy - Story Email Promo
Financial Promo:Joel Litman Fraud And Scamers Promo URL: https://secure.altimetry.com/?cid=MKT801804&eid=MKT804889&step=start&plcid=PLC208986&SNAID=SAC0017007240&encryptedSnaid=fgZM2fnc7DSp2W3xPcLiLVuHJ5bgAEEzqif5Ok1viVo%3D&emailjobid=5502633&emailname=2024-0519-HDN-Dedic...
- May 19th, 2024, 10:17 pm
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: Stansberry Research Financial Promo Email
- Replies: 0
- Views: 7769
Stansberry Research Financial Promo Email
Niche: Financial Promo - Stansberry Research For context this is the offer: https://orders.stansberryresearch.com/?cid=MKT803554&eid=MKT804666&step=start&plcid=PLC208858&SNAID=SAC0017007240&encryptedSnaid=fgZM2fnc7DSp2W3xPcLiLVuHJ5bgAEEzqif5Ok1viVo%3D&emailjobid=5502080&e...
- May 18th, 2024, 9:46 am
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: [Critique Needed] Ad copy for web design agency
- Replies: 2
- Views: 11153
Re: [Critique Needed] Ad copy for web design agency
Hi there Congratz on your facebook ad copy. I would like to give you my two cents, you can do what you like with it. This is just my feedback: I think the offer its scattered and its trying to reach to many different market segments. Do you want clients that want to seem more credible? Or clients th...
- May 18th, 2024, 9:24 am
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: Feedback on vsl script
- Replies: 1
- Views: 6721
Re: Feedback on vsl script
Hey there I like your writing. But I would maybe do a few changes to that first intro paragraph instead of going directly to the financial reset part maybe? This is what you wrote: Imagine the most colossal financial reset in history is in progress. We’re feeling it as rising prices at the grocery s...
- May 17th, 2024, 10:02 pm
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: Writers, critique this direct email copy!
- Replies: 2
- Views: 8325
Re: Writers, critique this direct email copy!
Hey I am not a pro copywriter so I can't give you the best tips on how to write amazing copy but I can give you some other tips. 1- Make your sentences shorter so they are easier to read. 2- Be more precise. Is it for women? Maybe you can talk about a specific event instead of making it to general. ...
- May 17th, 2024, 9:38 pm
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: REQUEST FOR COPY FEEDBACK - Financial Promo Email
- Replies: 0
- Views: 7943
REQUEST FOR COPY FEEDBACK - Financial Promo Email
Hi guys, Lucas Cepeda here. It's friday night in zurich. I am on my bed with my laptop on my lap writing some copy. I would appreciate your reviews. The promo is for a promotion from stansberry research (one of agoras brand) This is the offer: https://orders.stansberryresearch.com/?cid=MKT803554&...
- May 11th, 2024, 9:12 pm
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: Hello from Zurich, Switzerland!
- Replies: 4
- Views: 10980
Re: Hello from Zurich, Switzerland!
Thank you SARubin, appreciated!
- May 7th, 2024, 6:26 pm
- Forum: Email Copywriting
- Topic: Do you need help with your emails? I would love to help for FREE
- Replies: 0
- Views: 9059
Do you need help with your emails? I would love to help for FREE
Hi there My name is lucas cepeda. I have a proposition to help some copywriters with their emails. I am not looking to get paid. I am just looking to get some feedback and maybe use that feedback later on if I decide to do some freelancing offering email writing. I can write short, punchy copy that ...
- May 7th, 2024, 6:13 pm
- Forum: Beginners Area
- Topic: Feedback Appreciated!
- Replies: 2
- Views: 7015
Re: Feedback Appreciated!
Hello again Franklin!
Thank you.
Again, I was just wondering again if my writing skills are any good or I should go to programming instead jajaja...
Sincerely
Lucas
Thank you.
Again, I was just wondering again if my writing skills are any good or I should go to programming instead jajaja...
Sincerely
Lucas
- May 7th, 2024, 6:11 pm
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: Hello from Zurich, Switzerland!
- Replies: 4
- Views: 10980
Re: Hello from Zurich, Switzerland!
Hi Franklin!
Thank you.
Wish you a great day/afternoon!
Cheers
Lucas
Thank you.
Wish you a great day/afternoon!
Cheers
Lucas
- May 7th, 2024, 5:26 pm
- Forum: Beginners Area
- Topic: Feedback Appreciated!
- Replies: 2
- Views: 7015
Feedback Appreciated!
Hi everyone I just joined the forum hoping to learn a ton from all the valuable threads I have already seen posted here. I have recently started writing on my own to see if I my writing has any potential. I decided to maybe become a writer in the financial market and was wondering if anyone could gi...
- May 7th, 2024, 5:08 pm
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: Hello from Zurich, Switzerland!
- Replies: 4
- Views: 10980
Hello from Zurich, Switzerland!
Hi everyone! My name is Lucas Cepeda. I have been marketing online for over 15 years. I have experience in digital products and affiliate marketing and have used paid traffic as well as other traffic methods. Recently I have decided to delve into copywriting. I have read many books about the topic a...