heya, I really like this e-mail, it's fun and it makes me feel like you understand the problems that summer brings and how your product solves that.
i would be more precise in the last cta, i would make it more detailed about what the benefits would be to click and check out your products!
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	- by aspence999
- June 13th, 2024, 9:47 pm
- Forum: Email Copywriting
- Topic: hi there guys, just wanted a little feedback on my new email copy
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