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- January 4th, 2025, 2:01 pm
- Forum: Email Copywriting
- Topic: Need feedback on my 3rd attempt at direct response mail
- Replies: 7
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Re: Need feedback on my 3rd attempt at direct response mail
Hi Steve, My apologies for a late response. But, a huge thanks for pointing me towards the right direction. Thanks!! :D Yeah, do or die situations, tell me about it, back in '13 I was going through something similar. That's when I had to do a lot of odd jobs like selling tea leaves locally and BPO a...
- December 27th, 2024, 4:48 pm
- Forum: Email Copywriting
- Topic: Need feedback on my 3rd attempt at direct response mail
- Replies: 7
- Views: 16358
Re: Need feedback on my 3rd attempt at direct response mail
Hey Steve, Thanks again. But i wonder and excuse my naivety here but how to like, do the market sell thing since I don't have any product to sell of my own. Like a mock email campaign? I am just practicing and while at it, creating samples. And right now, just focusing on Direct mail types to "...
- December 26th, 2024, 2:53 pm
- Forum: Email Copywriting
- Topic: Need feedback on my 3rd attempt at direct response mail
- Replies: 7
- Views: 16358
Re: Need feedback on my 3rd attempt at direct response mail
Thank you Steve.
My main worry has always been if whatever I create looks professional or not. Like in this one, that "20%" part looks sorta out of place in the body text. But yeah, create urgency, of course, i get it now. Thanks a lot again.
My main worry has always been if whatever I create looks professional or not. Like in this one, that "20%" part looks sorta out of place in the body text. But yeah, create urgency, of course, i get it now. Thanks a lot again.
- December 25th, 2024, 3:20 pm
- Forum: Email Copywriting
- Topic: Need feedback on my 3rd attempt at direct response mail
- Replies: 7
- Views: 16358
Need feedback on my 3rd attempt at direct response mail
Hi all, I posted 2 direct response mail (DRM) body text in copywriting subreddit and i got some really nice and helpful feedback but for whatever reasons (maybe they thought I wasn't polite enough) I am probably banned since i can't post anything there now. so, here are the first and second attempts...