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by SARubin
September 23rd, 2023, 10:09 am
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Hello copywriters!
Replies: 2
Views: 14

Re: Hello copywriters!

Welcome to the community Dane. Feel free to have a look around and let us know if you have any questions. I've never heard of Dan Koe before but if you recommend him, I'll go check him out. Thanks. All the best, Steve My name is Dane Bentley. I got into copywriting last year and have been improving ...
by SARubin
September 17th, 2023, 11:58 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Please rate this email and critique it
Replies: 3
Views: 126

Re: Please rate this email and critique it

Thanks for helping I will improve my copy using this I have read Copywriting secrets by Jim Edwards and I'm currently reading Adweek Copywriting book Ah yes, those are both good books. Joe Sugarman is one of my favorite copywriters. He was brilliant at getting people to read the first line of copy,...
by SARubin
September 17th, 2023, 10:19 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Please rate this email and critique it
Replies: 3
Views: 126

Re: Please rate this email and critique it

You're getting better than you were just a few short weeks ago, dhananjay. But copywriting, the kind that brings in the money, is less about knowing how to write, and more about knowing "what" to write. And what to write, starts with understanding what your reader wants most of all. And wh...
by SARubin
September 6th, 2023, 10:17 pm
Forum: Sales Psychology
Topic: The Power of the Villain in Copywriting
Replies: 3
Views: 1763

Re: The Power of the Villain in Copywriting

josexxx wrote: I am very grateful for your content, I am from Brazil :D
Hi josexxx, and welcome to the copywriters forum.

I'm glad you like the content. And I'm happy to have you here all the way from Brazil :)

All the best,
Steve

P.S. I'm from USA
by SARubin
September 6th, 2023, 10:11 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Copywriting
Replies: 2
Views: 143

Re: Copywriting

Hi Nathan,
Welcome to the copywriters forum.
Feel free to have a look around and let us know if you have any questions or comments.

All the best,
Steve
by SARubin
August 30th, 2023, 11:16 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Tell the flaws of this Email
Replies: 3
Views: 216

Re: Tell the flaws of this Email

Yes, much better. Now you're getting the idea !3 If I'm a hiker, now I know you're talking to me. And now your headline got my attention... And, "The magical backpack every hiker needs" invokes just enough curiosity to make me wonder what's so magical about it. Good job... How does this so...
by SARubin
August 30th, 2023, 10:16 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Tell the flaws of this Email
Replies: 3
Views: 216

Re: Tell the flaws of this Email

The target audience are the people who find it difficult to carry items in a small or medium sized bag and have to carry large bags even for short trips Please tell me how can i write a better subject line than this and how can think more like a customer than a seller How to carry more items in les...
by SARubin
August 30th, 2023, 9:58 am
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Total Newbie
Replies: 2
Views: 186

Re: Total Newbie

Hi thestory,
Welcome to the copywriters forum. Glad you found us.

Feel free to have a look around, and let us know if you have any questions.

All the best,
Steve
by SARubin
August 25th, 2023, 11:11 am
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Introduction
Replies: 2
Views: 210

Re: Introduction

Hi Ifunanya Vivian, Welcome to the copywriters forum. I'm super happy to have another direct response copywriter join us. And I'm looking forward to connecting with you. All the best, Steve Hi everyone, I am Ifunanya Vivian, a copywriter specializing in direct response and email marketing. I am new ...
by SARubin
August 25th, 2023, 11:05 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: this is my first email, please tell me how can i improve
Replies: 4
Views: 235

Re: this is my first email, please tell me how can i improve

My Target audience are the people who want to travel without wasting time on finding places OK great. And now we want to narrow that target market down, to create a tighter focus, because every travel agency in the world is offering the same thing. And "people who want to travel without wastin...
by SARubin
August 25th, 2023, 10:42 am
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: a newbie here
Replies: 3
Views: 259

Re: a newbie here

Hello Mahmoud, Welcome to the copywriters forum. Yes, copywriting is a great skill to learn. Whether you're selling something, or just want to communicate a clear message to other people, copywriting can help you in many aspects of life. As far as finding a purpose to be human? I think that's a pers...
by SARubin
August 24th, 2023, 5:06 pm
Forum: General Copywriting
Topic: What should I use to for outreach?
Replies: 1
Views: 155

Re: What should I use to for outreach?

Hey there! I was just wondering what the best method of outreach might be for contacting a business becuase personally I feel that social media has a more personal touch to it but then also some of the businesses that I want to work with just don't use social medias or make no effort to direct you ...
by SARubin
August 24th, 2023, 4:47 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: this is my first email, please tell me how can i improve
Replies: 4
Views: 235

Re: this is my first email, please tell me how can i improve

Hi dhananjay, Welcome to the copywriters forum. Ready for a Wild Adventure? Conquer a New Country Like a Pro! WE OFTEN WASTE TIME ON VACATIONS ON FINDING GOOD HOTELS TO STAY, FINDING RENTAL VEHICLES, FINDING TOURIST SPOTS ETC. IT OFTEN GETS WORSE WHEN GET A HOTEL BUT THE SERVICE SUCKS BUT WHAT WE CA...
by SARubin
August 12th, 2023, 8:27 am
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: I would like to introduce myself.
Replies: 2
Views: 275

Re: I would like to introduce myself.

Hello RelaxedNico19, Welcome to the copywriters forum. Losing that much weight is an impressive accomplishment. Congratulations on a job well done !3 Yes, copywriting is a great skill to have, and it's one that you can use for many different aspects in life. Feel free to take a look around the forum...
by SARubin
July 21st, 2023, 2:30 pm
Forum: Direct Respone Copywriting
Topic: Examples of Big Ideas
Replies: 1
Views: 314

Re: Examples of Big Ideas

Hi Guys and Gals, Can I ask a question that has been plaguing me since I started learning copywriting and that is the idea of THE BIG IDEA Can somebody provide some examples, especially for make money products because they all have the bid idea of making money easily. If we polarise this idea and s...
by SARubin
July 20th, 2023, 7:51 pm
Forum: Email Copywriting
Topic: Cold emailing potential clients
Replies: 3
Views: 435

Re: Cold emailing potential clients

Hey Harry_Buck, Welcome to the forums. Glad you could join us. Hi! I was just wondering, I do not have a portfolio made and I want to get low pay or free gigs to start making my portfolio. Personally, I would not recommend offering "low pay or free" as your selling point. Selling yourself ...
by SARubin
July 16th, 2023, 10:27 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Rate my work/ critique my copy.
Replies: 4
Views: 511

Re: Rate my work/ critique my copy.

Hey, thank you for the reply; I actually have a full Google doc with an Avatar built and a target market defined. I just put that as an example so the reading is less, but it was my fault. I have attached the doc with all the details I know I can go even deeper, but I didn't as I thought it was jus...
by SARubin
July 14th, 2023, 9:33 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Rate my work/ critique my copy.
Replies: 4
Views: 511

Re: Rate my work/ critique my copy.

The target market is 20-60-year-old males doing a corporate job who hates it and want to start their own business. Hey Somewhat, Welcome to the forum. I'm happy to see you taking an interest in copywriting. I glanced at your copy, but before we even get into your copy, I think we should start at th...
by SARubin
July 6th, 2023, 1:01 am
Forum: General Copywriting
Topic: Features VS benefits – which is more important in sales copy?
Replies: 6
Views: 16362

Re: Features VS benefits – which is more important in sales copy?

Hello Everybody, Can somebody shed some light on where we place features. I know we have the headline then opening, then we are meant to explain benefits and features back up the benefits and give credibility, but do we add the feature right after the benefit and move to the next benefit and so on ...
by SARubin
June 24th, 2023, 3:11 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: New Here`
Replies: 2
Views: 4516

Re: New Here`

Gabriel Justin wrote: June 23rd, 2023, 10:27 am Hello! Here to learn!
Welcome to the forums. There's a lot of good posts here that you can learn from. Feel free to have a look around and let us know if you have any questions.

All the best,
Steve