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by SARubin
May 10th, 2024, 11:26 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Writers, critique this direct email copy!
Replies: 2
Views: 552

Re: Writers, critique this direct email copy!

Hello Caramba, Welcome to the forum. There's a few grammar errors but you can work on that as you go. The main thing I would emphasize is to be more clear and specific on the cost, so you don't make your reader stop midway through the copy. In one sentence you say our shampoo bottle facilitates a yo...
by SARubin
May 10th, 2024, 10:59 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Hello from Zurich, Switzerland!
Replies: 4
Views: 1388

Re: Hello from Zurich, Switzerland!

Hello Lucas, and welcome.
by SARubin
May 10th, 2024, 10:56 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Morning (or afternoon, or evening!) All
Replies: 2
Views: 587

Re: Morning (or afternoon, or evening!) All

Welcome to the copywriters forum, Michael.
Feel free to have a look around, there's lots of good stuff here posted by some of the members.

All the best,
Steve
by SARubin
May 7th, 2024, 12:29 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Introduction
Replies: 1
Views: 1121

Re: Introduction

Joh wrote: May 1st, 2024, 5:00 pm Hello I'm a proficient writer looking for the best companies to express my writing. I've written several books and smaller form of art. I can help create any visual through writing.
Can you elaborate on this?
by SARubin
May 7th, 2024, 12:20 pm
Forum: Email Copywriting
Topic: Is there a normal writing time emails take when you're new?
Replies: 1
Views: 536

Re: Is there a normal writing time emails take when you're new?

Hello Bopdodebop, welcome to the forums. Don't beat yourself up about it. Yes, 8 hours to write 4 emails is a crazy long time, but you're just starting out and still learning. And yes, you will get faster. Once you know your market better you can cut your research time dramatically because you'll al...
by SARubin
April 22nd, 2024, 7:58 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: [Critique Needed] Ad copy for web design agency
Replies: 2
Views: 3276

Re: [Critique Needed] Ad copy for web design agency

Hey habeebAde, Welcome to the copywriters forum. I don't work with facebook ads so I don't know all of facebooks' rules and policies about what they will, or will not allow in advertising. But I can still help you out here with some general copy tips... Of course the first question is, what do you k...
by SARubin
March 30th, 2024, 11:02 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: reviews and feedback
Replies: 3
Views: 1121

Re: reviews and feedback

OK, practice is a good way to get better. The first thing I'd suggest is to pull the reader in a bit more at the start of your message. Most people will only give you a couple of seconds to decide if they want to continue reading your message, or not. So we need to hook them quickly. I wrote a sugge...
by SARubin
March 29th, 2024, 1:20 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: reviews and feedback
Replies: 3
Views: 1121

Re: reviews and feedback

Hello Shagun,
Welcome to the forum.

Is this just for practice or is this an email you're actually going to send to a list?
by SARubin
February 11th, 2024, 10:32 am
Forum: Beginners Area
Topic: Noob here looking for some guidance
Replies: 1
Views: 1100

Re: Noob here looking for some guidance

What can I expect that's gonna suck as a copywriter? Well, I can only speak for myself, but the biggest suck for me has always been when you spend a lot of time and effort crafting a beautiful sales pitch, and you think you hit all the right notes and trigger points... and it bombs. Some copywriter...
by SARubin
February 8th, 2024, 12:51 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Feedback on course title and description
Replies: 4
Views: 1626

Re: Feedback on course title and description

Hi nhsadika, welcome to the forum. I think everyone has an opinion (on just about everything) and I'm no exception to that rule, so I'll toss in my 2 cents... Hi I'm working on copy for a new course focused on helping people understand and prepare from a global money reset. The course name (after so...
by SARubin
January 29th, 2024, 11:47 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Review this copy pls
Replies: 2
Views: 1889

Re: Review this copy pls

Hey Mubarak, It looks pretty good. I do have a suggestion that might make it flow a little better. The first thing that caught my eye is the opening lede could use a better segue. Your headline (subject line) says... Subject: Affiliate CPA: My Humbling Start This is a good headline. It leads me to b...
by SARubin
January 18th, 2024, 9:11 am
Forum: General Copywriting
Topic: How start learn copywriting ?
Replies: 3
Views: 4015

Re: How start learn copywriting ?

Hello everyone, I'm really lost, I don't know where to start to learn copywriting. I've heard that books are the best way to learn but I don't know which book to read to learn MAINLY copywriting and not psychology and all that. If you have suggestions for books that I could read or free training co...
by SARubin
January 16th, 2024, 9:37 am
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Introduice myself !
Replies: 1
Views: 3893

Re: Introduice myself !

Hi Ahmad, welcome to the copywriters forum. Feel free to have a look around and let us know if you have any questions. All the best, Steve Hi everyone, my name is Ahmad. I'm 17 and I'm a young boy from Ivory Coast. The reason why I'm here is to learn more about copywriting. I'm not very good in Engl...
by SARubin
January 11th, 2024, 10:57 am
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: I have a question
Replies: 1
Views: 3891

Re: I have a question

Hi, I have a question about " legendary marketers' " super affiliate secrets . can anyone explain what it is and what I am gonna get from that if I buy that product??? Hi Shubham29, and welcome to the forum. I'm not familiar with that particular product, but I am familiar with the busines...
by SARubin
January 7th, 2024, 2:32 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Review this copy pls
Replies: 4
Views: 3340

Re: Review this copy pls

This is an email copy in the weight loss niche and it's targeting those looking to lose weight. jamulim gave you some good copy pointers. I'm going to add one more piece of the puzzle for you... We want to tighten up your market focus a bit. Because "those looking to lose weight" is a bit...
by SARubin
January 7th, 2024, 1:52 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: New member
Replies: 3
Views: 3249

Re: New member

Hi Mubarak, and welcome to the copywriters forum.

Feel free to have a look around and let us know if you have any questions.

All the best,
Steve
by SARubin
December 27th, 2023, 2:45 pm
Forum: General Copywriting
Topic: Seeking advice on online PDF editing tools
Replies: 1
Views: 2060

Re: Seeking advice on online PDF editing tools

Hi Martial28, and welcome to the copywriters forum.

I'm not sure if this is everything you're looking for but I've used it in the past for editing and formatting PDFs.
Hope it helps...

https://www.pdfescape.com/
by SARubin
December 24th, 2023, 7:40 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Who’s the tour guide?
Replies: 2
Views: 2968

Re: Who’s the tour guide?

Hello, I’m new here :)/ Call me Joe and I’m happy to be here. Looking forward to sharing what I know, learning from others and networking with great and likeminded people. So I’d really be glad if a tour guide can show me around. Never mind, I’d find my way around. I always do. Joe. Hey Joe, welcom...
by SARubin
December 24th, 2023, 7:35 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Hello from Derbyshire, UK.
Replies: 3
Views: 3399

Re: Hello from Derbyshire, UK.

Hi all I'm excited to have found your community. I'm an oil industry geologist (speciaising in geocomputing/technology) and am hoping to switch careers to copywriting -- and am also hoping that I havent left it too late, given that I'm now 52. For the last two years, I've been writing much of the m...
by SARubin
December 19th, 2023, 12:54 am
Forum: A-list Copywriter Wisdom
Topic: Gary Bencivenga
Replies: 18
Views: 45675

Re: Gary Bencivenga

Tobias wrote: December 18th, 2023, 11:51 pm Hey SARubin! I would love to get the 29 marketing bullets. Can you send them to me if you have the chance?
Hey Tobias, welcome to the forum.
The download that roark posted above has most of them, and I think my folder has a couple more in addition to that.
Sure, I can send them to you in a PM...