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Hi DLaw, It looks pretty good. One suggestion... If you want more people to click on the link, I recommend NOT giving away the 5 steps in the email. Instead of giving them the "secret", try leaving the mystery open so they need to take a small action (click on the link) if they want to kno...

Hi Liam (or Suzanne?) Welcome to the forums... The emails look OK except for one major issue. You need to show a bit more confidence and stop being so apologetic. The first email looks good. You start out by complimenting them, to build rapport, and then you offer them something of value. But... The...

Hey eldorian, Welcome to the forum! I believe only you can tell you what's right for you. But since you asked for opinions, I'll give you mine... As far as learning copywriting, I say you should give it a try and see if it clicks for you. What's the worst thing that could happen? You could learn a n...

Hey Steve, Thanks again. But i wonder and excuse my naivety here but how to like, do the market sell thing since I don't have any product to sell of my own. Like a mock email campaign? I am just practicing and while at it, creating samples. And right now, just focusing on Direct mail types to "...

Thank you Steve. My main worry has always been if whatever I create looks professional or not. Like in this one, that "20%" part looks sorta out of place in the body text. But yeah, create urgency, of course, i get it now. Thanks a lot again. You're very welcome. Yeah, it's a bit awkward,...

Hi all, I posted 2 direct response mail (DRM) body text in copywriting subreddit and i got some really nice and helpful feedback but for whatever reasons (maybe they thought I wasn't polite enough) I am probably banned since i can't post anything there now. Advices were mostly about keeping things ...

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It might work for you, it might not, but either way I still think it's a fun little writing exercise.

Give it a try and let me know what you think...

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Hey i am looking for a subject line for the following two cold emails (for both the same). I already have a few approaches here and would like to test 2-4 but which ones or are there better ones? Idea 1: Something for you (first name) Idea 2: Enjoyed your video on [Topic] Idea 3: Hey [name] thought...

I already wrote a previous topic asking for a guide to evaluate this. During this time, 2 people bought it (for $5). But I don’t know whether it’s worth increasing the price per hectare of it. So I need your advice :). What do you think? Congratulations on selling your first 2 copies of this guide,...

Thanks for the feedback much appreciated! Now for practising purposes how would I practise market research ? For starters we want to think about who your ideal customer is. Once we know whom we're selling to, then we can spend some time hanging out in their world, it could be out in the real world ...

It looks pretty good. You might want to use a slightly stronger call to action at the end. Something like Watch the 2 mins video right now and end your baby's eczema for good or Watch the 2 mins video right now and say goodbye to your baby's eczema once and for all Or something along those lines to ...

It's not bad for a first try, Spyros. Unfortunately you lost my attention at the first sentence because my answer is no, I've never fantasized what it’s like to be a barista. So my first thought would be "I guess you must be talking to someone else", and I'd click away from that sales page...

Why not do both... When a prospective client asks to see your portfolio send them a link to your google drive, and a link to download the PDF. This way they can choose the one they want. As a prospective client it would impress me more to see you put in the extra effort of giving me options, and giv...

Like I said, it looks pretty good. A couple things that popped out at me are near the end of the copy... Where you say "Imagine having to brag to your friends and family that you get to drink immensely cheap, but high quality coffees for as long as you wish" Change the word "having&qu...

It looks pretty good Zak, Of course like most copy it can be tightened up a bit. But overall it's welcoming and it gives a nice discount incentive to get that first sale rolling. I have a couple suggestions but first a quick question...Is this for an actual promotion or is just for practice? All the...

Hey Mzo,
Welcome to the forum.
Feel free to have a look around and let us know if there's anything you need.

All the best,
Steve

Hello Caramba, Welcome to the forum. There's a few grammar errors but you can work on that as you go. The main thing I would emphasize is to be more clear and specific on the cost, so you don't make your reader stop midway through the copy. In one sentence you say our shampoo bottle facilitates a yo...

Hello Lucas, and welcome.

Welcome to the copywriters forum, Michael.
Feel free to have a look around, there's lots of good stuff here posted by some of the members.

All the best,
Steve

Joh wrote: ↑May 1st, 2024, 5:00 pm Hello I'm a proficient writer looking for the best companies to express my writing. I've written several books and smaller form of art. I can help create any visual through writing.

Can you elaborate on this?