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Hey i am looking for a subject line for the following two cold emails (for both the same). I already have a few approaches here and would like to test 2-4 but which ones or are there better ones? Idea 1: Something for you (first name) Idea 2: Enjoyed your video on [Topic] Idea 3: Hey [name] thought...

I already wrote a previous topic asking for a guide to evaluate this. During this time, 2 people bought it (for $5). But I don’t know whether it’s worth increasing the price per hectare of it. So I need your advice :). What do you think? Congratulations on selling your first 2 copies of this guide,...

Thanks for the feedback much appreciated! Now for practising purposes how would I practise market research ? For starters we want to think about who your ideal customer is. Once we know whom we're selling to, then we can spend some time hanging out in their world, it could be out in the real world ...

It looks pretty good. You might want to use a slightly stronger call to action at the end. Something like Watch the 2 mins video right now and end your baby's eczema for good or Watch the 2 mins video right now and say goodbye to your baby's eczema once and for all Or something along those lines to ...

It's not bad for a first try, Spyros. Unfortunately you lost my attention at the first sentence because my answer is no, I've never fantasized what it’s like to be a barista. So my first thought would be "I guess you must be talking to someone else", and I'd click away from that sales page...

Why not do both... When a prospective client asks to see your portfolio send them a link to your google drive, and a link to download the PDF. This way they can choose the one they want. As a prospective client it would impress me more to see you put in the extra effort of giving me options, and giv...

Like I said, it looks pretty good. A couple things that popped out at me are near the end of the copy... Where you say "Imagine having to brag to your friends and family that you get to drink immensely cheap, but high quality coffees for as long as you wish" Change the word "having&qu...

It looks pretty good Zak, Of course like most copy it can be tightened up a bit. But overall it's welcoming and it gives a nice discount incentive to get that first sale rolling. I have a couple suggestions but first a quick question...Is this for an actual promotion or is just for practice? All the...

Hey Mzo,
Welcome to the forum.
Feel free to have a look around and let us know if there's anything you need.

All the best,
Steve

Hello Caramba, Welcome to the forum. There's a few grammar errors but you can work on that as you go. The main thing I would emphasize is to be more clear and specific on the cost, so you don't make your reader stop midway through the copy. In one sentence you say our shampoo bottle facilitates a yo...

Hello Lucas, and welcome.

Welcome to the copywriters forum, Michael.
Feel free to have a look around, there's lots of good stuff here posted by some of the members.

All the best,
Steve

Joh wrote: ↑May 1st, 2024, 5:00 pm Hello I'm a proficient writer looking for the best companies to express my writing. I've written several books and smaller form of art. I can help create any visual through writing.

Can you elaborate on this?

Hello Bopdodebop, welcome to the forums. Don't beat yourself up about it. Yes, 8 hours to write 4 emails is a crazy long time, but you're just starting out and still learning. And yes, you will get faster. Once you know your market better you can cut your research time dramatically because you'll al...

Hey habeebAde, Welcome to the copywriters forum. I don't work with facebook ads so I don't know all of facebooks' rules and policies about what they will, or will not allow in advertising. But I can still help you out here with some general copy tips... Of course the first question is, what do you k...

OK, practice is a good way to get better. The first thing I'd suggest is to pull the reader in a bit more at the start of your message. Most people will only give you a couple of seconds to decide if they want to continue reading your message, or not. So we need to hook them quickly. I wrote a sugge...

Hello Shagun,
Welcome to the forum.

Is this just for practice or is this an email you're actually going to send to a list?

What can I expect that's gonna suck as a copywriter? Well, I can only speak for myself, but the biggest suck for me has always been when you spend a lot of time and effort crafting a beautiful sales pitch, and you think you hit all the right notes and trigger points... and it bombs. Some copywriter...

Hi nhsadika, welcome to the forum. I think everyone has an opinion (on just about everything) and I'm no exception to that rule, so I'll toss in my 2 cents... Hi I'm working on copy for a new course focused on helping people understand and prepare from a global money reset. The course name (after so...

Hey Mubarak, It looks pretty good. I do have a suggestion that might make it flow a little better. The first thing that caught my eye is the opening lede could use a better segue. Your headline (subject line) says... Subject: Affiliate CPA: My Humbling Start This is a good headline. It leads me to b...