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Hi Mike, Welcome to the forum, happy to have you join us. That's quite the project you've got going on here. I wish you all the success in the world. I have a question though, from a copywriters point of view... What exactly does it do for me? We’re currently developing CASi Scout, a product that he...

I think it looks OK for a first try but it's a bit generic. Can you give us a reason to buy from you, instead of someone else? Even a couple of words can make a difference. Something like "Our custom suit and tie" might make people wonder what makes yours different from every other suit an...

Good morning Joseph, Welcome to the copywriters playground! I also love to debate over writing nuance (to comma, or not to comma... that is the question :D ) I don't really have a favorite copywriting hack at the moment. There's so many to choose from, I fear picking a favorite would leave the rest ...

Hey Srishty , I think it looks pretty good. You're getting better with every try. Now you can try to tighten it up a little bit. Every good copywriter knows the value of editing. Whenever I write something I always set it aside for a while, then I come back to it later and see if I can edit out at l...

Hi Srishty, and welcome to the copywriters forum! I just read your welcome email, and here's my first impression... I like it. It comes across friendly, welcoming and authentic. The only review/critique from me is that there's a couple of awkward sentences that could be re-written. This one (and thi...

Hey opteamyzer, Welcome to the forums! Funny you should ask this question. A while ago I actually wrote a short post about this very thing. Let me see if I can find it... Ah, here it is... What's the weirdest thing you've ever been asked to sell? It was a few years ago but it still makes me chuckle ...

Hi DLaw, It looks pretty good. One suggestion... If you want more people to click on the link, I recommend NOT giving away the 5 steps in the email. Instead of giving them the "secret", try leaving the mystery open so they need to take a small action (click on the link) if they want to kno...

Hi Liam (or Suzanne?) Welcome to the forums... The emails look OK except for one major issue. You need to show a bit more confidence and stop being so apologetic. The first email looks good. You start out by complimenting them, to build rapport, and then you offer them something of value. But... The...

Hey eldorian, Welcome to the forum! I believe only you can tell you what's right for you. But since you asked for opinions, I'll give you mine... As far as learning copywriting, I say you should give it a try and see if it clicks for you. What's the worst thing that could happen? You could learn a n...

Hey Steve, Thanks again. But i wonder and excuse my naivety here but how to like, do the market sell thing since I don't have any product to sell of my own. Like a mock email campaign? I am just practicing and while at it, creating samples. And right now, just focusing on Direct mail types to "...

Thank you Steve. My main worry has always been if whatever I create looks professional or not. Like in this one, that "20%" part looks sorta out of place in the body text. But yeah, create urgency, of course, i get it now. Thanks a lot again. You're very welcome. Yeah, it's a bit awkward,...

Hi all, I posted 2 direct response mail (DRM) body text in copywriting subreddit and i got some really nice and helpful feedback but for whatever reasons (maybe they thought I wasn't polite enough) I am probably banned since i can't post anything there now. Advices were mostly about keeping things ...

Here's another trick to help break through writers block.
It might work for you, it might not, but either way I still think it's a fun little writing exercise.

Give it a try and let me know what you think...

The A to Z Method of Eliminating Writers Block
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Hey i am looking for a subject line for the following two cold emails (for both the same). I already have a few approaches here and would like to test 2-4 but which ones or are there better ones? Idea 1: Something for you (first name) Idea 2: Enjoyed your video on [Topic] Idea 3: Hey [name] thought...

I already wrote a previous topic asking for a guide to evaluate this. During this time, 2 people bought it (for $5). But I don’t know whether it’s worth increasing the price per hectare of it. So I need your advice :). What do you think? Congratulations on selling your first 2 copies of this guide,...

Thanks for the feedback much appreciated! Now for practising purposes how would I practise market research ? For starters we want to think about who your ideal customer is. Once we know whom we're selling to, then we can spend some time hanging out in their world, it could be out in the real world ...

It looks pretty good. You might want to use a slightly stronger call to action at the end. Something like Watch the 2 mins video right now and end your baby's eczema for good or Watch the 2 mins video right now and say goodbye to your baby's eczema once and for all Or something along those lines to ...

It's not bad for a first try, Spyros. Unfortunately you lost my attention at the first sentence because my answer is no, I've never fantasized what it’s like to be a barista. So my first thought would be "I guess you must be talking to someone else", and I'd click away from that sales page...

Why not do both... When a prospective client asks to see your portfolio send them a link to your google drive, and a link to download the PDF. This way they can choose the one they want. As a prospective client it would impress me more to see you put in the extra effort of giving me options, and giv...

Like I said, it looks pretty good. A couple things that popped out at me are near the end of the copy... Where you say "Imagine having to brag to your friends and family that you get to drink immensely cheap, but high quality coffees for as long as you wish" Change the word "having&qu...