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by ED209
February 12th, 2023, 3:28 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Online Course (require comments and advice, go easy on me please)
Replies: 4
Views: 4189

Re: Online Course (require comments and advice, go easy on me please)

Thanks Steve I've just read your reply multiple times, sometimes I find this helps me to fully understand what is being conveyed, I absorb all advice so that it is clear to me and I am able to fully understand what is being communicated, thankyou I've always enjoyed writing and I am hopeful of being...
by ED209
February 11th, 2023, 9:57 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Online Course (require comments and advice, go easy on me please)
Replies: 4
Views: 4189

Re: Online Course (require comments and advice, go easy on me please)

Evening SARuben I think you've already figured out that I'm kinda stuck I've absorbed a lot of content on how to write effective copy in the style of a successful writer (the above took about) 11 days of going back and forth till it resembled copy that works I worked on the above as a template to be...
by ED209
February 11th, 2023, 8:32 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Rate my work
Replies: 5
Views: 4348

Re: Rate my work

I Loved it - Well Done

I'd be very happy as a client to receive this as your finished work

Question from a newbie "How many people were involved in the finished item? or did you do all of the website building yourself?"
by ED209
February 11th, 2023, 5:41 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Online Course (require comments and advice, go easy on me please)
Replies: 4
Views: 4189

Online Course (require comments and advice, go easy on me please)

Direct Sales Letter Style (Gary Halbert) This is the about the 9th draft, each part of the original draft has been re-edited so please any advice would be helpful IF YOUR THE SMARTEST PERSON IN THE ROOM STOP READING!!! Dear Reader, If you're looking for a way to finally achieve your goals and unlock...
by ED209
February 8th, 2023, 9:48 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Hello, First timer has arrived
Replies: 3
Views: 3642

Hello, First timer has arrived

Hi all,

Looking forward to reading through all of the form comments, and hoping to contribute

ED209