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by lottor
Sat Aug 01, 2020 12:32 am
Forum: Beginners Area
Topic: How can i find my first client ?
Replies: 5
Views: 364

Re: How can i find my first client ?

Hey nizarkassite, I got one thing that if you really put into action, you’ll show yourself how you can get your first client. Are you ready? Keep reading if so! I’ve been studying copywriting for some time and one of the most precious lessons I learned is this… Show your copy to someone and ask ’em ...
by lottor
Wed Mar 11, 2020 5:38 pm
Forum: General Copywriting
Topic: Been receaving so much from this forum… now I think it’s about time I gave…
Replies: 2
Views: 296

Been receaving so much from this forum… now I think it’s about time I gave…

Hi y’all, I just want to share something that has made me improve my skill. I’ll put the source (link) here, so you guys can take advantage too. Without a doubt, these tips will make you craft better copy. What you’ll learn now it’s a treasure that THE GREAT GARY HALBERT shared and… I so believe wha...
by lottor
Sun Feb 23, 2020 1:09 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews
Topic: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service
Replies: 21
Views: 931

Re: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service

Hey SARubin, I’m so glad for your help so far. I’ve taken every suggestion of yours. Now, I want to finish this post because I’ve written my copy from scratch and with… your help, I was able to finish it better than I would on my own. So…What I’ll do from now on is…keep studying…keep learning…keep t...
by lottor
Tue Feb 18, 2020 2:01 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews
Topic: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service
Replies: 21
Views: 931

Re: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service

Hi guys! It’s been awhile, but I’m back. I ran an ad for six days (02/12/2020 – 02/17/20200 I ran it through facebook ads (That was my first time using this platform). Below I’ll show the copy I used and the result I got. Feel free to point out any piece of my copy that you feel like it’s not ok and...
by lottor
Sat Feb 08, 2020 12:26 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews
Topic: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service
Replies: 21
Views: 931

Re: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service

Hey SARubin, thanks for you help. I read your suggestion: “keeping your audience engaged part 1 and 2“. Note: I want the swipe file you mentioned at the end of part 2. Let’s move on… I tried your ” Which means method” and I’ll put it bellow what I got out of it: Feature - Benefits - Benefits (Next l...
by lottor
Tue Feb 04, 2020 4:10 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews
Topic: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service
Replies: 21
Views: 931

Re: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service

Hi guys. Still on the subject, I’ve found what I believe that is really keeping me from writing a good copy. As you already know, I have a small business… really… really… small (I offer dog grooming-related service). I need to bring in more customers but the point I’m struck in is “translate facts t...
by lottor
Wed Jan 29, 2020 6:51 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews
Topic: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service
Replies: 21
Views: 931

Re: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service

Hey Sarubin,

Thanks for the suggestions.

It feels like after reading them my brains starts coming up with lots of new possibilities.

Your feedbacks has helped me to get better at writing.

I’ll look closely to all your teachings and I’ll put them in practice.

Thanks again!
by lottor
Tue Jan 28, 2020 8:54 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews
Topic: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service
Replies: 21
Views: 931

Re: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service

Hi, y’all. It’s been past 10 days from my last post. And I’d like to show what has happened since then… and need your help to move on. I took / stole the @sarubin tip about the headline and put it in practice without changing a single word: Attention busy dog owners who want their dogs professionall...
by lottor
Sat Jan 18, 2020 8:09 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews
Topic: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service
Replies: 21
Views: 931

Re: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service

Now you’re starting to get the idea lottor, It’s all about what you can do for them , and their dog. (because that’s what they care about). And where you say… “Our driver will fetch your dog at your home. This way, you’ll have more time to handle others demanding-time tasks”. That’s what a real off...
by lottor
Fri Jan 17, 2020 2:44 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews
Topic: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service
Replies: 21
Views: 931

Re: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service

Hi, I’ve made some changes. Your suggestions are welcomed, though. Headline Make more with your time while your dog get cleaned Copy Does your dog need get trimmed and cleaned and you have no time to drop by at a dog-grooming service? Don’t worry! Our driver will fetch your dog at your home. This wa...
by lottor
Thu Jan 16, 2020 7:42 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews
Topic: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service
Replies: 21
Views: 931

Re: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service

One more thing, see the statement below: “Look, we’re still in January and we got over 50-satisfied client already! Wherever they go, their dogs can’t go unnoticed. The owners are loving it. Would you like experiencing this too?” I thought by doing this people would desire the same results for them...
by lottor
Wed Jan 15, 2020 1:36 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews
Topic: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service
Replies: 21
Views: 931

Re: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service

Your grammar needs work if you’re selling to English speaking dog owners. Haven’t found a dog-grooming yet? Dog-grooming is the verb, it’s what you do. “Dog-groomer” is who you are, so it should read – Haven’t found a dog-groomer yet? Imagine your pooch smelling all-good, clean and cute. That sente...
by lottor
Wed Jan 15, 2020 1:12 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews
Topic: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service
Replies: 21
Views: 931

Re: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service

Thanks SARubin. I’ll review the points you’ve just showed me I must improve and see how I can make them better. It was helpful! One more thing, see the statement below: “Look, we’re still in January and we got over 50-satisfied client already! Wherever they go, their dogs can’t go unnoticed. The own...
by lottor
Tue Jan 14, 2020 6:23 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews
Topic: I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service
Replies: 21
Views: 931

I Need help to write copy for dog-grooming service

Hi, I need you guys help me. I’ve been studying copywriting for 2 month or so. I’ve read lots of blogs, watched videos and so on. I currently have a pet-related service (dog-grooming, bath and cleaning) but I can’t seem to write a copy that sells. Though I work in the pet area, I want to become a pr...