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by dhananjay
September 17th, 2023, 11:18 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Please rate this email and critique it
Replies: 3
Views: 6221

Re: Please rate this email and critique it

Thanks for helping I will improve my copy using this

I have read Copywriting secrets by Jim Edwards and I'm currently reading Adweek Copywriting book
by dhananjay
September 10th, 2023, 11:46 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Please rate this email and critique it
Replies: 3
Views: 6221

Please rate this email and critique it

Get Our New Amazing Earphones Hii name, I’m so excited to tell you that we are going to launch our AZ earphones next week with almost the best features you can ever get on any earphones In this earphone you will get • 60 hrs playtime • Ultra-fast 20 mins charge time • Unimaginable bass • Immersive 3...
by dhananjay
September 4th, 2023, 2:08 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Rate this email please
Replies: 2
Views: 4139

Re: Rate this email please

I have a question about emails that should I sell them in email or should I direct them to the landing page ? Both. In my experience the email should sell them on the idea of clicking to the landing page. This creates a micro-commitment of action and momentum that moves them towards the sale. Thank...
by dhananjay
September 3rd, 2023, 8:37 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Rate this email please
Replies: 2
Views: 4139

Rate this email please

I have a question about emails that should I sell them in email or should I direct them to the landing page ? and how can I improve this email 3 ways to lose weight even if you have tried everything Hi, <name>, You have tried a lot of things to lose weight and you have become fed up with not getting...
by dhananjay
August 30th, 2023, 10:30 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Tell the flaws of this Email
Replies: 3
Views: 3363

Re: Tell the flaws of this Email

How does this sound
The magical backpack every hiker needs
by dhananjay
August 28th, 2023, 2:09 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Tell the flaws of this Email
Replies: 3
Views: 3363

Tell the flaws of this Email

The target audience are the people who find it difficult to carry items in a small or medium sized bag and have to carry large bags even for short trips Please tell me how can i write a better subject line than this and how can think more like a customer than a seller How to carry more items in less...
by dhananjay
August 25th, 2023, 2:58 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: this is my first email, please tell me how can i improve
Replies: 4
Views: 3172

Re: this is my first email, please tell me how can i improve

Thanks sir, I will improve my copy using this technique
by dhananjay
August 25th, 2023, 9:45 am
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Hello mentors
Replies: 0
Views: 1625

Hello mentors

I am dhananjay and I am a beginner in copywriting, and need your help to improve my skills
Thank you
by dhananjay
August 25th, 2023, 1:31 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: this is my first email, please tell me how can i improve
Replies: 4
Views: 3172

Re: this is my first email, please tell me how can i improve

My Target audience are the people who want to travel without wasting time on finding places
by dhananjay
August 24th, 2023, 2:17 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: this is my first email, please tell me how can i improve
Replies: 4
Views: 3172

this is my first email, please tell me how can i improve

Ready for a Wild Adventure? Conquer a New Country Like a Pro! WE OFTEN WASTE TIME ON VACATIONS ON FINDING GOOD HOTELS TO STAY, FINDING RENTAL VEHICLES, FINDING TOURIST SPOTS ETC. IT OFTEN GETS WORSE WHEN GET A HOTEL BUT THE SERVICE SUCKS BUT WHAT WE CAN DO IS TO COMPROMISE AT THAT TIME THAT’S HOW WE...