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I'm writing a video sales letter script - 2 people talking in this one - for the Total Financial Reset (thanks Steve) a course on how to make money from a money transition. We're stuck in our heads. ..mostly thinking about one area I'd like feedback on does the intrigue carry the people through this...

Thanks Steve,

I've been pondering the comments for a while.

Tying the title/description into the script (video) wording is a lot of work, not sure how people can iterate on this so frequently.

Do you mind if we post some of the intro of our script here to see if it's catching?

1: Financial Reset Unleashed: Dominate the New Money Game and Unleash 10x Returns 2: A Survival Guide To Master The Money Reset And Unleash 10x+ Returns 3: A Survival Guide To Thriving In A Money Revolution And Unleashing 10x+ Returns Hi, Out of the three I like number one the most. I don't know wh...

Hi I'm working on copy for a new course focused on helping people understand and prepare from a global money reset. The course name (after some surveys) was either Money Mastery or Total Reset Total Reset so far won out because it has the concept of an event we are in (a reset) so its more specific....

Hi there -- Im a designer into finance, working on copywriting now and then...thought I would say hi!