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- April 12th, 2021, 10:24 am
- Forum: Analyze The Ad
- Topic: Why is this direct mail piece a total failure?
- Replies: 10
- Views: 8860
Re: Why is this direct mail piece a total failure?
When their main selling point is about "faster speed", (they mention it in the headline, sub-head, and first bullet point) why would they waste money targeting zip codes that already have higher internet speeds than what they're promoting? Couldn't the money could be better spent mailing ...
- April 8th, 2021, 5:08 pm
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: Is this a good copy? Patience Is Key To Happiness
- Replies: 7
- Views: 7937
Re: Is this a good copy? Patience Is Key To Happiness
It seems heartfelt, and other than a few glaring grammar errors I like it. The 2 big questions I have are 1) Did you show it to your followers yet? 2) Did it get you any sales? Disclaimer: This is a sales pitch for my Christian Devotional titled Patience Is Key To Happiness. This devotional is aimed...
- April 3rd, 2021, 11:29 am
- Forum: A-list Copywriter Wisdom
- Topic: Clayton Makepeace Tribute
- Replies: 7
- Views: 8333
Re: Clayton Makepeace Tribute
Thanks for the links wordsmith. Clayton Makepeace was one of the all time greatest.
- April 3rd, 2021, 11:25 am
- Forum: General Copywriting
- Topic: The importance of Proof in Our Copywriting
- Replies: 4
- Views: 4316
Re: The importance of Proof in Our Copywriting
Would this be considered an advertorial? Or is there another name for it? Your post comes at a perfect time. Here's what happened. I have a landscaping client that sells a product/service called Foamsteam. It's a great product, does exactly as stated; however, he wasn't able to draw interest from hi...
- April 3rd, 2021, 11:21 am
- Forum: General Copywriting
- Topic: Story in Copywriting - How To Flesh Out Your Story
- Replies: 5
- Views: 5048
Re: Story in Copywriting - How To Flesh Out Your Story
The basic 6 point structure is... Once upon a time... Every day was the same... Then one day... Because of that... And because of that... Until finally... Once upon a time I had a boring job working in a factory. :| Everyday was the same, and every week the paycheck was too small. :cry: Then one da...
- April 3rd, 2021, 11:05 am
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: Corporate Joe Saying Hello
- Replies: 4
- Views: 5515
Re: Corporate Joe Saying Hello
Welcome Rich,
I'm glad you decided to join us.
I think we all need to look beyond our own desk once in a while. And it's good to have other like-minded people to bounce ideas around with. Looking forward to chatting with you.
I'm glad you decided to join us.
I think we all need to look beyond our own desk once in a while. And it's good to have other like-minded people to bounce ideas around with. Looking forward to chatting with you.
- March 29th, 2021, 7:29 pm
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: Newbie and hungry
- Replies: 3
- Views: 4127
- March 25th, 2021, 1:58 pm
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: Hello Copywriters
- Replies: 12
- Views: 23341
Re: Hello Copywriters
Welcome @Wordsmith -
I can hardly wait to talk copy with an experienced master like yourself. I'm a little over 6 years into my career and I'm sure I can learn a lot from you.
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I can hardly wait to talk copy with an experienced master like yourself. I'm a little over 6 years into my career and I'm sure I can learn a lot from you.
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- March 24th, 2021, 9:43 pm
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: Ok my first attempt. Yes you can rip into it.
- Replies: 7
- Views: 7694
Re: Ok my first attempt. Yes you can rip into it.
Target is to sell this software to companies who hire data entry staff . Convince them that they will save money and process more data. Any thoughts things I am missing to make the copy flow better ? Two things... 1) Where's the proof that it works and that it will do what you claim? 2) Why should ...
- March 24th, 2021, 9:21 pm
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: New member here
- Replies: 8
- Views: 10282
Re: New member here
Welcome to the forum ArticleWriter - glad you found us!
Do mean like a blog post?
- March 20th, 2021, 1:54 am
- Forum: General Copywriting
- Topic: Introducing a Headline Formula Guaranteed to Pull Readers Into Your Copy
- Replies: 8
- Views: 7182
Re: Introducing a Headline Formula Guaranteed to Pull Readers Into Your Copy
Let me back up. I'm sure you remember this headline: They Laughed When I Sat Down At The Piano—But When I Started To Play! [/b][/size] I think everybody seen this headline or a swiped version of it. If there was ever an award for most swiped headline this would definitely be in the running for top ...
- March 20th, 2021, 1:43 am
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: Hola guys 😀
- Replies: 4
- Views: 5109
Re: Hola guys 😀
Welcome to the forum @collins1234
Happy to have you here
Happy to have you here
- March 20th, 2021, 1:40 am
- Forum: Email Copywriting
- Topic: Are there any proven email templates I can use?
- Replies: 10
- Views: 10324
Re: Are there any proven email templates I can use?
With this client, it was hard enough to get him to agree to this storyline email. He cringed at the initial idea. Once he was supposedly onboard, that was the extent he would go. Our account manager tried multiple times, explaining the campaign wasn't finished and we needed to follow-up and try a d...
- March 18th, 2021, 7:01 pm
- Forum: Off Topic
- Topic: Copywriting is open source
- Replies: 7
- Views: 9126
Re: Copywriting is open source
Is PLR still around? I thought that fad died 10 years agoTheWauchulin wrote: ↑March 18th, 2021, 5:56 pm So technically you're saying PLR is acceptable. Hmmm.....????
- March 17th, 2021, 8:22 pm
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: So, This Is The Copywriters Forum...Oh!!! Hello!!!
- Replies: 3
- Views: 6967
Re: So, This Is The Copywriters Forum...Oh!!! Hello!!!
Welcome to the forum @TheWauchulin
Always great to have another experienced copywriter on board
Always great to have another experienced copywriter on board
- March 17th, 2021, 10:25 am
- Forum: Email Copywriting
- Topic: Are there any proven email templates I can use?
- Replies: 10
- Views: 10324
Re: Are there any proven email templates I can use?
Have you tried signing up for email lists from other successful marketers in your niche? Then you can see what they do and perhaps use some of their style as a templates to learn from. This is a good way to go. Just make sure to change it up. You don't want to send the exact same email as everyone ...
- March 14th, 2021, 11:59 am
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: Hello fellow copywriters & cubs...
- Replies: 4
- Views: 7523
Re: Hello fellow copywriters & cubs...
Hello @wrcato and welcome.
16 years is a long time. That's awesome!
Do you write for other people or only for your own products, or both? - just curious
16 years is a long time. That's awesome!
Do you write for other people or only for your own products, or both? - just curious
- March 2nd, 2021, 9:51 am
- Forum: Beginners Area
- Topic: Negotiating Boundaries & Payment
- Replies: 5
- Views: 4661
Re: Negotiating Boundaries & Payment
Issue/Question: The client has repeatedly gone back into the published blog to make changes. Given my name is on the piece, I feel compelled to follow-up by revisiting the post AGAIN - to fix new typos and make revisions, to ensure voice consistency. We have gone back and forth so many times now, t...
- March 2nd, 2021, 9:35 am
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: Newbie Cheri here
- Replies: 6
- Views: 8052
Re: Newbie Cheri here
Hello @CheriAnderson - Welcome to the forum.
Let us know if you have any questions.
Let us know if you have any questions.
- February 25th, 2021, 11:12 am
- Forum: Off Topic
- Topic: The Power of Words...
- Replies: 2
- Views: 5031
Re: The Power of Words...
Your thought for the day seems a bit dark. Are you feeling OK?