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by SARubin
November 17th, 2023, 3:35 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Brand new and looking for a No BS website copy critique
Replies: 2
Views: 8865

Re: Brand new and looking for a No BS website copy critique

Hey Designking, I just took a look at your site and it looks OK (of course I'm assuming you're going to finish it and make all those navigation links go somewhere) As far as the copy goes? It's not terrible, but it's kind of generic. So my first question would be, who is your target market? Are you ...
by SARubin
November 6th, 2023, 8:45 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Syntax to Storytelling: Seeking Copywriting Comrades for Insight and Fun
Replies: 8
Views: 26995

Re: Syntax to Storytelling: Seeking Copywriting Comrades for Insight and Fun

How do i know which companies are making money with their emails? You probably won't know for sure, unless you can get them to tell you. But you can look at companies that have been in business for a while. And one's that are obviously making money (or they wouldn't be in business very long). And i...
by SARubin
November 6th, 2023, 8:34 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Hello everyone!
Replies: 1
Views: 4938

Re: Hello everyone!

luxfer wrote: Looking forward to learn and share about copywriting. Any type of advice is welcome!
Hello luxfer,

Welcome to the copywriters forum.
Looking forward to sharing and learning from you as well.
by SARubin
November 6th, 2023, 8:31 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Hello
Replies: 2
Views: 7325

Re: Hello

Azrael wrote: November 6th, 2023, 5:46 am Hello everyone!

Under the pseudonym Azrael, I'm thrilled to join this community of passionate writers, where I hope to share writing tips and learn from diverse talents.
Hello Azrael,
We're thrilled you could join us
by SARubin
November 6th, 2023, 8:29 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Liking this forum already...
Replies: 1
Views: 6206

Re: Liking this forum already...

roark wrote: October 31st, 2023, 10:32 pm This forum reminds me of the good ol' days of the internet
That's probably because I was old when we built it.
At least old enough to remember the good ol' days 8-)
by SARubin
October 31st, 2023, 4:56 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Syntax to Storytelling: Seeking Copywriting Comrades for Insight and Fun
Replies: 8
Views: 26995

Re: Syntax to Storytelling: Seeking Copywriting Comrades for Insight and Fun

I have read books: Scientific Advertising, Great Leads by Michael Masterson, Breakthrough Advertising by Eugene Schwartz and The Ultimate Sales Letter by Dan Kennedy, The AdWeek Copywriting Handbook by Joe Sugarman. The book with the biggest impact on me is Breakthrough Advertising. Hi Prashant, an...
by SARubin
October 30th, 2023, 8:59 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Just to say hello
Replies: 2
Views: 5275

Re: Just to say hello

Hello everyone, I'm a copywriter/translator based in Northern Ireland. I'm looking forward to connecting with other copywriters and exchanging gems and ideas. :)/ Welcome to the forum Wordlywise, I'm looking forward to sharing some of those gems and ideas with you. Feel free to browse around and jo...
by SARubin
October 30th, 2023, 8:53 pm
Forum: A-list Copywriter Wisdom
Topic: Gary Bencivenga
Replies: 18
Views: 40692

Re: Gary Bencivenga

Thanks Steve! I managed to find “Success Bullets:12 Lifesaving Quotations” on Scribd. I think this might be a subset of the ezine but still interesting. Sounds interesting roark. I'd love to take a look at it if you don't mind sharing. My browser doesn't seem to like the Scribd website and it won't...
by SARubin
October 29th, 2023, 5:11 pm
Forum: A-list Copywriter Wisdom
Topic: Gary Bencivenga
Replies: 18
Views: 40692

Re: Gary Bencivenga

Great post! I am really enjoying his material. Would you happen to know where I can access his “Success Bullets” ezine? He mentions it in his 12th Marketing bullet and I’ve seen links to successbullets.com but the link doesn’t seem to be working for me. Hi roark, welcome to the copywriters forum. I...
by SARubin
October 9th, 2023, 7:30 pm
Forum: Beginners Area
Topic: Is a really high paid job?
Replies: 4
Views: 5090

Re: Is a really high paid job?

Hello there, Thanks in advance to all of you for reading. I am new to copywriting, i made a course of 50 hours( in the italian market) last year and after one free job provided by a client of the company who sold me the course i never studied or did anything again for many reasons. First is a need ...
by SARubin
September 23rd, 2023, 10:09 am
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Hello copywriters!
Replies: 2
Views: 6834

Re: Hello copywriters!

Welcome to the community Dane. Feel free to have a look around and let us know if you have any questions. I've never heard of Dan Koe before but if you recommend him, I'll go check him out. Thanks. All the best, Steve My name is Dane Bentley. I got into copywriting last year and have been improving ...
by SARubin
September 17th, 2023, 11:58 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Please rate this email and critique it
Replies: 3
Views: 6050

Re: Please rate this email and critique it

Thanks for helping I will improve my copy using this I have read Copywriting secrets by Jim Edwards and I'm currently reading Adweek Copywriting book Ah yes, those are both good books. Joe Sugarman is one of my favorite copywriters. He was brilliant at getting people to read the first line of copy,...
by SARubin
September 17th, 2023, 10:19 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Please rate this email and critique it
Replies: 3
Views: 6050

Re: Please rate this email and critique it

You're getting better than you were just a few short weeks ago, dhananjay. But copywriting, the kind that brings in the money, is less about knowing how to write, and more about knowing "what" to write. And what to write, starts with understanding what your reader wants most of all. And wh...
by SARubin
September 6th, 2023, 10:17 pm
Forum: Sales Psychology
Topic: The Power of the Villain in Copywriting
Replies: 3
Views: 6715

Re: The Power of the Villain in Copywriting

josexxx wrote: I am very grateful for your content, I am from Brazil :D
Hi josexxx, and welcome to the copywriters forum.

I'm glad you like the content. And I'm happy to have you here all the way from Brazil :)

All the best,
Steve

P.S. I'm from USA
by SARubin
September 6th, 2023, 10:11 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Copywriting
Replies: 2
Views: 4771

Re: Copywriting

Hi Nathan,
Welcome to the copywriters forum.
Feel free to have a look around and let us know if you have any questions or comments.

All the best,
Steve
by SARubin
August 30th, 2023, 11:16 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Tell the flaws of this Email
Replies: 3
Views: 3153

Re: Tell the flaws of this Email

Yes, much better. Now you're getting the idea !3 If I'm a hiker, now I know you're talking to me. And now your headline got my attention... And, "The magical backpack every hiker needs" invokes just enough curiosity to make me wonder what's so magical about it. Good job... How does this so...
by SARubin
August 30th, 2023, 10:16 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Tell the flaws of this Email
Replies: 3
Views: 3153

Re: Tell the flaws of this Email

The target audience are the people who find it difficult to carry items in a small or medium sized bag and have to carry large bags even for short trips Please tell me how can i write a better subject line than this and how can think more like a customer than a seller How to carry more items in les...
by SARubin
August 30th, 2023, 9:58 am
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Total Newbie
Replies: 2
Views: 3506

Re: Total Newbie

Hi thestory,
Welcome to the copywriters forum. Glad you found us.

Feel free to have a look around, and let us know if you have any questions.

All the best,
Steve
by SARubin
August 25th, 2023, 11:11 am
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Introduction
Replies: 2
Views: 4574

Re: Introduction

Hi Ifunanya Vivian, Welcome to the copywriters forum. I'm super happy to have another direct response copywriter join us. And I'm looking forward to connecting with you. All the best, Steve Hi everyone, I am Ifunanya Vivian, a copywriter specializing in direct response and email marketing. I am new ...
by SARubin
August 25th, 2023, 11:05 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: this is my first email, please tell me how can i improve
Replies: 4
Views: 2935

Re: this is my first email, please tell me how can i improve

My Target audience are the people who want to travel without wasting time on finding places OK great. And now we want to narrow that target market down, to create a tighter focus, because every travel agency in the world is offering the same thing. And "people who want to travel without wastin...