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by SARubin
September 17th, 2023, 10:19 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Please rate this email and critique it
Replies: 3
Views: 6098

Re: Please rate this email and critique it

You're getting better than you were just a few short weeks ago, dhananjay. But copywriting, the kind that brings in the money, is less about knowing how to write, and more about knowing "what" to write. And what to write, starts with understanding what your reader wants most of all. And wh...
by SARubin
September 6th, 2023, 10:17 pm
Forum: Sales Psychology
Topic: The Power of the Villain in Copywriting
Replies: 3
Views: 6992

Re: The Power of the Villain in Copywriting

josexxx wrote: I am very grateful for your content, I am from Brazil :D
Hi josexxx, and welcome to the copywriters forum.

I'm glad you like the content. And I'm happy to have you here all the way from Brazil :)

All the best,
Steve

P.S. I'm from USA
by SARubin
September 6th, 2023, 10:11 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Copywriting
Replies: 2
Views: 4813

Re: Copywriting

Hi Nathan,
Welcome to the copywriters forum.
Feel free to have a look around and let us know if you have any questions or comments.

All the best,
Steve
by SARubin
August 30th, 2023, 11:16 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Tell the flaws of this Email
Replies: 3
Views: 3207

Re: Tell the flaws of this Email

Yes, much better. Now you're getting the idea !3 If I'm a hiker, now I know you're talking to me. And now your headline got my attention... And, "The magical backpack every hiker needs" invokes just enough curiosity to make me wonder what's so magical about it. Good job... How does this so...
by SARubin
August 30th, 2023, 10:16 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Tell the flaws of this Email
Replies: 3
Views: 3207

Re: Tell the flaws of this Email

The target audience are the people who find it difficult to carry items in a small or medium sized bag and have to carry large bags even for short trips Please tell me how can i write a better subject line than this and how can think more like a customer than a seller How to carry more items in les...
by SARubin
August 30th, 2023, 9:58 am
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Total Newbie
Replies: 2
Views: 3552

Re: Total Newbie

Hi thestory,
Welcome to the copywriters forum. Glad you found us.

Feel free to have a look around, and let us know if you have any questions.

All the best,
Steve
by SARubin
August 25th, 2023, 11:11 am
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Introduction
Replies: 2
Views: 4637

Re: Introduction

Hi Ifunanya Vivian, Welcome to the copywriters forum. I'm super happy to have another direct response copywriter join us. And I'm looking forward to connecting with you. All the best, Steve Hi everyone, I am Ifunanya Vivian, a copywriter specializing in direct response and email marketing. I am new ...
by SARubin
August 25th, 2023, 11:05 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: this is my first email, please tell me how can i improve
Replies: 4
Views: 3009

Re: this is my first email, please tell me how can i improve

My Target audience are the people who want to travel without wasting time on finding places OK great. And now we want to narrow that target market down, to create a tighter focus, because every travel agency in the world is offering the same thing. And "people who want to travel without wastin...
by SARubin
August 25th, 2023, 10:42 am
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: a newbie here
Replies: 3
Views: 4555

Re: a newbie here

Hello Mahmoud, Welcome to the copywriters forum. Yes, copywriting is a great skill to learn. Whether you're selling something, or just want to communicate a clear message to other people, copywriting can help you in many aspects of life. As far as finding a purpose to be human? I think that's a pers...
by SARubin
August 24th, 2023, 5:06 pm
Forum: General Copywriting
Topic: What should I use to for outreach?
Replies: 1
Views: 2092

Re: What should I use to for outreach?

Hey there! I was just wondering what the best method of outreach might be for contacting a business becuase personally I feel that social media has a more personal touch to it but then also some of the businesses that I want to work with just don't use social medias or make no effort to direct you ...
by SARubin
August 24th, 2023, 4:47 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: this is my first email, please tell me how can i improve
Replies: 4
Views: 3009

Re: this is my first email, please tell me how can i improve

Hi dhananjay, Welcome to the copywriters forum. Ready for a Wild Adventure? Conquer a New Country Like a Pro! WE OFTEN WASTE TIME ON VACATIONS ON FINDING GOOD HOTELS TO STAY, FINDING RENTAL VEHICLES, FINDING TOURIST SPOTS ETC. IT OFTEN GETS WORSE WHEN GET A HOTEL BUT THE SERVICE SUCKS BUT WHAT WE CA...
by SARubin
August 12th, 2023, 8:27 am
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: I would like to introduce myself.
Replies: 2
Views: 4530

Re: I would like to introduce myself.

Hello RelaxedNico19, Welcome to the copywriters forum. Losing that much weight is an impressive accomplishment. Congratulations on a job well done !3 Yes, copywriting is a great skill to have, and it's one that you can use for many different aspects in life. Feel free to take a look around the forum...
by SARubin
July 21st, 2023, 2:30 pm
Forum: Direct Respone Copywriting
Topic: Examples of Big Ideas
Replies: 1
Views: 2132

Re: Examples of Big Ideas

Hi Guys and Gals, Can I ask a question that has been plaguing me since I started learning copywriting and that is the idea of THE BIG IDEA Can somebody provide some examples, especially for make money products because they all have the bid idea of making money easily. If we polarise this idea and s...
by SARubin
July 20th, 2023, 7:51 pm
Forum: Email Copywriting
Topic: Cold emailing potential clients
Replies: 5
Views: 22518

Re: Cold emailing potential clients

Hey Harry_Buck, Welcome to the forums. Glad you could join us. Hi! I was just wondering, I do not have a portfolio made and I want to get low pay or free gigs to start making my portfolio. Personally, I would not recommend offering "low pay or free" as your selling point. Selling yourself ...
by SARubin
July 16th, 2023, 10:27 am
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Rate my work/ critique my copy.
Replies: 4
Views: 2806

Re: Rate my work/ critique my copy.

Hey, thank you for the reply; I actually have a full Google doc with an Avatar built and a target market defined. I just put that as an example so the reading is less, but it was my fault. I have attached the doc with all the details I know I can go even deeper, but I didn't as I thought it was jus...
by SARubin
July 14th, 2023, 9:33 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Rate my work/ critique my copy.
Replies: 4
Views: 2806

Re: Rate my work/ critique my copy.

The target market is 20-60-year-old males doing a corporate job who hates it and want to start their own business. Hey Somewhat, Welcome to the forum. I'm happy to see you taking an interest in copywriting. I glanced at your copy, but before we even get into your copy, I think we should start at th...
by SARubin
July 6th, 2023, 1:01 am
Forum: General Copywriting
Topic: Features VS benefits – which is more important in sales copy?
Replies: 6
Views: 24727

Re: Features VS benefits – which is more important in sales copy?

Hello Everybody, Can somebody shed some light on where we place features. I know we have the headline then opening, then we are meant to explain benefits and features back up the benefits and give credibility, but do we add the feature right after the benefit and move to the next benefit and so on ...
by SARubin
June 24th, 2023, 3:11 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: New Here`
Replies: 2
Views: 9671

Re: New Here`

Gabriel Justin wrote: June 23rd, 2023, 10:27 am Hello! Here to learn!
Welcome to the forums. There's a lot of good posts here that you can learn from. Feel free to have a look around and let us know if you have any questions.

All the best,
Steve
by SARubin
June 24th, 2023, 3:06 pm
Forum: Useful Writing Tools
Topic: Pagiarism Checkers
Replies: 1
Views: 15281

Pagiarism Checkers

We had a request from a new member to add some plagiarism checkers to the site. For content writing? I personally don't use them too much because I write my own stuff. But here is one I've used before, and the free version seems good. Here's the link... https://www.quetext.com/ If you have any other...
by SARubin
June 19th, 2023, 9:41 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Rate my Sales Page
Replies: 2
Views: 5268

Re: Rate my Sales Page

Congratulations on your first assignment. The first time is always exciting, and a bit scary. Will it work? Will it not work? Will I be a hero, or a zero? Personally, I think your copy looks pretty good, Jones. Of course I don't know anything about the bodybuilding market, but I do know a bit about ...