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- September 17th, 2023, 10:19 am
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: Please rate this email and critique it
- Replies: 3
- Views: 6098
Re: Please rate this email and critique it
You're getting better than you were just a few short weeks ago, dhananjay. But copywriting, the kind that brings in the money, is less about knowing how to write, and more about knowing "what" to write. And what to write, starts with understanding what your reader wants most of all. And wh...
- September 6th, 2023, 10:17 pm
- Forum: Sales Psychology
- Topic: The Power of the Villain in Copywriting
- Replies: 3
- Views: 6992
Re: The Power of the Villain in Copywriting
Hi josexxx, and welcome to the copywriters forum.josexxx wrote: I am very grateful for your content, I am from Brazil
I'm glad you like the content. And I'm happy to have you here all the way from Brazil
All the best,
Steve
P.S. I'm from USA
- September 6th, 2023, 10:11 pm
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: Copywriting
- Replies: 2
- Views: 4813
Re: Copywriting
Hi Nathan,
Welcome to the copywriters forum.
Feel free to have a look around and let us know if you have any questions or comments.
All the best,
Steve
Welcome to the copywriters forum.
Feel free to have a look around and let us know if you have any questions or comments.
All the best,
Steve
- August 30th, 2023, 11:16 am
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: Tell the flaws of this Email
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3207
Re: Tell the flaws of this Email
Yes, much better. Now you're getting the idea !3 If I'm a hiker, now I know you're talking to me. And now your headline got my attention... And, "The magical backpack every hiker needs" invokes just enough curiosity to make me wonder what's so magical about it. Good job... How does this so...
- August 30th, 2023, 10:16 am
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: Tell the flaws of this Email
- Replies: 3
- Views: 3207
Re: Tell the flaws of this Email
The target audience are the people who find it difficult to carry items in a small or medium sized bag and have to carry large bags even for short trips Please tell me how can i write a better subject line than this and how can think more like a customer than a seller How to carry more items in les...
- August 30th, 2023, 9:58 am
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: Total Newbie
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3552
Re: Total Newbie
Hi thestory,
Welcome to the copywriters forum. Glad you found us.
Feel free to have a look around, and let us know if you have any questions.
All the best,
Steve
Welcome to the copywriters forum. Glad you found us.
Feel free to have a look around, and let us know if you have any questions.
All the best,
Steve
- August 25th, 2023, 11:11 am
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: Introduction
- Replies: 2
- Views: 4637
Re: Introduction
Hi Ifunanya Vivian, Welcome to the copywriters forum. I'm super happy to have another direct response copywriter join us. And I'm looking forward to connecting with you. All the best, Steve Hi everyone, I am Ifunanya Vivian, a copywriter specializing in direct response and email marketing. I am new ...
- August 25th, 2023, 11:05 am
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: this is my first email, please tell me how can i improve
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3009
Re: this is my first email, please tell me how can i improve
My Target audience are the people who want to travel without wasting time on finding places OK great. And now we want to narrow that target market down, to create a tighter focus, because every travel agency in the world is offering the same thing. And "people who want to travel without wastin...
- August 25th, 2023, 10:42 am
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: a newbie here
- Replies: 3
- Views: 4555
Re: a newbie here
Hello Mahmoud, Welcome to the copywriters forum. Yes, copywriting is a great skill to learn. Whether you're selling something, or just want to communicate a clear message to other people, copywriting can help you in many aspects of life. As far as finding a purpose to be human? I think that's a pers...
- August 24th, 2023, 5:06 pm
- Forum: General Copywriting
- Topic: What should I use to for outreach?
- Replies: 1
- Views: 2092
Re: What should I use to for outreach?
Hey there! I was just wondering what the best method of outreach might be for contacting a business becuase personally I feel that social media has a more personal touch to it but then also some of the businesses that I want to work with just don't use social medias or make no effort to direct you ...
- August 24th, 2023, 4:47 pm
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: this is my first email, please tell me how can i improve
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3009
Re: this is my first email, please tell me how can i improve
Hi dhananjay, Welcome to the copywriters forum. Ready for a Wild Adventure? Conquer a New Country Like a Pro! WE OFTEN WASTE TIME ON VACATIONS ON FINDING GOOD HOTELS TO STAY, FINDING RENTAL VEHICLES, FINDING TOURIST SPOTS ETC. IT OFTEN GETS WORSE WHEN GET A HOTEL BUT THE SERVICE SUCKS BUT WHAT WE CA...
- August 12th, 2023, 8:27 am
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: I would like to introduce myself.
- Replies: 2
- Views: 4530
Re: I would like to introduce myself.
Hello RelaxedNico19, Welcome to the copywriters forum. Losing that much weight is an impressive accomplishment. Congratulations on a job well done !3 Yes, copywriting is a great skill to have, and it's one that you can use for many different aspects in life. Feel free to take a look around the forum...
- July 21st, 2023, 2:30 pm
- Forum: Direct Respone Copywriting
- Topic: Examples of Big Ideas
- Replies: 1
- Views: 2132
Re: Examples of Big Ideas
Hi Guys and Gals, Can I ask a question that has been plaguing me since I started learning copywriting and that is the idea of THE BIG IDEA Can somebody provide some examples, especially for make money products because they all have the bid idea of making money easily. If we polarise this idea and s...
- July 20th, 2023, 7:51 pm
- Forum: Email Copywriting
- Topic: Cold emailing potential clients
- Replies: 5
- Views: 22518
Re: Cold emailing potential clients
Hey Harry_Buck, Welcome to the forums. Glad you could join us. Hi! I was just wondering, I do not have a portfolio made and I want to get low pay or free gigs to start making my portfolio. Personally, I would not recommend offering "low pay or free" as your selling point. Selling yourself ...
- July 16th, 2023, 10:27 am
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: Rate my work/ critique my copy.
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2806
Re: Rate my work/ critique my copy.
Hey, thank you for the reply; I actually have a full Google doc with an Avatar built and a target market defined. I just put that as an example so the reading is less, but it was my fault. I have attached the doc with all the details I know I can go even deeper, but I didn't as I thought it was jus...
- July 14th, 2023, 9:33 pm
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: Rate my work/ critique my copy.
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2806
Re: Rate my work/ critique my copy.
The target market is 20-60-year-old males doing a corporate job who hates it and want to start their own business. Hey Somewhat, Welcome to the forum. I'm happy to see you taking an interest in copywriting. I glanced at your copy, but before we even get into your copy, I think we should start at th...
- July 6th, 2023, 1:01 am
- Forum: General Copywriting
- Topic: Features VS benefits – which is more important in sales copy?
- Replies: 6
- Views: 24727
Re: Features VS benefits – which is more important in sales copy?
Hello Everybody, Can somebody shed some light on where we place features. I know we have the headline then opening, then we are meant to explain benefits and features back up the benefits and give credibility, but do we add the feature right after the benefit and move to the next benefit and so on ...
- June 24th, 2023, 3:11 pm
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: New Here`
- Replies: 2
- Views: 9671
Re: New Here`
Welcome to the forums. There's a lot of good posts here that you can learn from. Feel free to have a look around and let us know if you have any questions.
All the best,
Steve
- June 24th, 2023, 3:06 pm
- Forum: Useful Writing Tools
- Topic: Pagiarism Checkers
- Replies: 1
- Views: 15281
Pagiarism Checkers
We had a request from a new member to add some plagiarism checkers to the site. For content writing? I personally don't use them too much because I write my own stuff. But here is one I've used before, and the free version seems good. Here's the link... https://www.quetext.com/ If you have any other...
- June 19th, 2023, 9:41 pm
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: Rate my Sales Page
- Replies: 2
- Views: 5268
Re: Rate my Sales Page
Congratulations on your first assignment. The first time is always exciting, and a bit scary. Will it work? Will it not work? Will I be a hero, or a zero? Personally, I think your copy looks pretty good, Jones. Of course I don't know anything about the bodybuilding market, but I do know a bit about ...