I think it looks good. Maybe a bit long for an average email. Especially the subject line, it will probably get cut-off (truncated) after 60 characters for most people's email readers. Even shorter on smartphones.
But for the right list your email should get engagement and clicks.
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- July 9th, 2023, 3:54 pm
- Forum: Beginners Area
- Topic: Just looking for some critique
- Replies: 4
- Views: 12392
- July 5th, 2023, 4:13 pm
- Forum: Useful Writing Tools
- Topic: Pagiarism Checkers
- Replies: 1
- Views: 15293
Re: Pagiarism Checkers
Grammarly has a plagiarism checker to go with all their grammar and punctuation tools
https://www.grammarly.com/plagiarism-checker
I don't know how accurate it is, but they've been around for a long time so they're probably as good, or better, than most of the other ones out there.
https://www.grammarly.com/plagiarism-checker
I don't know how accurate it is, but they've been around for a long time so they're probably as good, or better, than most of the other ones out there.
- July 5th, 2023, 3:58 pm
- Forum: General Copywriting
- Topic: Features VS benefits – which is more important in sales copy?
- Replies: 6
- Views: 24766
Re: Features VS benefits – which is more important in sales copy?
First: Welcome to the copywriters forum :)/ Second: Slow down, you're asking a lot of questions all at once. Third: I'll try to answer your first question, first. Hello Everybody, Can somebody shed some light on where we place features. I know we have the headline then opening, then we are meant to ...
- June 24th, 2023, 9:22 am
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: New Here`
- Replies: 2
- Views: 9686
Re: New Here`
Hello Gabriel Justin.
Welcome to the copywriters forum.
Welcome to the copywriters forum.
- June 20th, 2023, 8:53 am
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: Rate my Sales Page
- Replies: 2
- Views: 5288
Re: Rate my Sales Page
Just make sure you emphasize proof elements. Because if you're dealing with a market that is already solution aware, then they already know there are other products out there. So we need to make sure they believe yours is better than the other guys. I see you already have a couple sections for &quo...
- June 7th, 2023, 7:46 pm
- Forum: Content Writing
- Topic: Can Wikipedia make online visibility easily?
- Replies: 2
- Views: 12098
- May 20th, 2023, 11:13 am
- Forum: General Copywriting
- Topic: Should I stick to a niche in my copywriting?
- Replies: 3
- Views: 4465
Re: Should I stick to a niche in my copywriting?
Hi Kris, Another member here recently asked a similar question, and I gave them this same answer. There are no absolute rules about this. You do not have to limit yourself to only one niche, but it's a good idea to start with one niche and gain some experience. Then you can take that experience and ...
- May 18th, 2023, 10:58 am
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: Copywriting Forum To be
- Replies: 4
- Views: 4729
Re: Copywriting Forum To be
Hey Kris,
Welcome to the forum
Welcome to the forum
- April 27th, 2023, 10:28 pm
- Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
- Topic: River Cruise Copy
- Replies: 1
- Views: 7892
Re: River Cruise Copy
On the first two ads I would leave off the price - 856€
Let prospects click the ad to visit the cruise ship website first, then they can see the full value of the offer along side the price tag.
Let prospects click the ad to visit the cruise ship website first, then they can see the full value of the offer along side the price tag.
- April 27th, 2023, 3:43 pm
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: Aspiring Email Marketing Copywriter in Need of Guidance"
- Replies: 4
- Views: 11060
Re: Aspiring Email Marketing Copywriter in Need of Guidance"
Hello Judah Nunn
Welcome to the copywriters forum.
Welcome to the copywriters forum.
- April 22nd, 2023, 10:24 am
- Forum: General Copywriting
- Topic: Is there another way?
- Replies: 11
- Views: 35123
Re: Is there another way?
I uploaded an email swipe file here --> viewtopic.php?f=18&t=504Relu Iulian wrote: ↑April 21st, 2023, 7:49 pm
Thank you very much! Where I could see how a proper email template would look like? As a good example to follow.
It's mostly B2C emails but you can maybe tweak them to work for B2B
- April 21st, 2023, 4:13 pm
- Forum: General Copywriting
- Topic: Is there another way?
- Replies: 11
- Views: 35123
Re: Is there another way?
So is there a way of becoming a successful copywriter without being notorious on social media? And if yes, which way? Thank you very much! Email marketing still works. The trick is finding the email addresses of decision makers. You might have to use social media to find legit contacts and leads th...
- April 17th, 2023, 6:07 pm
- Forum: Beginners Area
- Topic: Niche Selection
- Replies: 6
- Views: 8236
Re: Niche Selection
Hey people! I have a question about niche selection. I mean, there are many, of course, but as in selecting only one, like Social Media for example, it would mean that I have to limit myself only to social media copy? You do not have to limit yourself to only one niche, there are no absolute rules ...
- April 16th, 2023, 10:21 pm
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: Hello Everyone!
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4950
Re: Hello Everyone!
Hi Relu, welcome to the forums.Relu Iulian wrote: ↑April 16th, 2023, 9:13 pm Hi People! I'm Relu, 24 yo. I just started my journey in copywriting and I am looking for a place with like minded people to learn more and more about this skill.
- April 11th, 2023, 9:25 am
- Forum: General Copywriting
- Topic: Why do buyers buy from you and not your competitor
- Replies: 3
- Views: 4806
Re: Why do buyers buy from you and not your competitor
Is generating value showing that person the way or doing for them what they don't want to do? What do you think about this? That's one way to create value. If what you offer to that person is worth more to them than the money in their pocket they will give you their money for what you are offering....
- April 8th, 2023, 1:50 pm
- Forum: Website Copywriting
- Topic: What tactic would you use to fill a doctor's appointment book?
- Replies: 10
- Views: 12505
Re: What tactic would you use to fill a doctor's appointment book?
But I wanted to hear from you, if you were to work in this niche, what would you do to be able to fill a schedule of these doctors? I've never worked in this niche but what I've seen other doctors do come down to branding and positioning. The more recognizable the doctor, the more people search for...
- April 8th, 2023, 1:36 pm
- Forum: Introduce Yourself
- Topic: Greetings from a newbie
- Replies: 3
- Views: 4164
Re: Greetings from a newbie
Welcome to the forum @jamulim -
- April 6th, 2023, 11:00 pm
- Forum: Website Copywriting
- Topic: What tactic would you use to fill a doctor's appointment book?
- Replies: 10
- Views: 12505
Re: What tactic would you use to fill a doctor's appointment book?
Hi @Franklin, thanks for reaching out, nice to hear from you. And I'm very happy to be here with you. To your first question... I thought of reaching out to doctors using paid ads within Instagram and Facebook, directing those doctors to a blog where I could provide articles showing how they can fi...
- April 6th, 2023, 10:33 am
- Forum: Website Copywriting
- Topic: What tactic would you use to fill a doctor's appointment book?
- Replies: 10
- Views: 12505
Re: What tactic would you use to fill a doctor's appointment book?
Hello @luuuuisc10 - Welcome to the forums :)/ You seem to know about your market. For the next step have you thought about how you are going to contact these doctors to introduce yourself? Social media? Email? Paid ads? Another question is have you clearly defined what you are offering them? Are you...
- March 30th, 2023, 2:27 pm
- Forum: Writing Techniques
- Topic: This Copywriting Tactic Increases Conversions
- Replies: 3
- Views: 8704
Re: This Copywriting Tactic Increases Conversions
This is a good one Steve