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by SARubin
May 22nd, 2023, 7:37 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Women's bespoke shoes
Replies: 1
Views: 3623

Re: Women's bespoke shoes

Hello Goodman3898, I don't know much about your market, or about women's shoes (except I know that my wife has 15 or 20 pairs of shoes) but at first glance your copy looks good enough to test. My best advice is to put it out there and see what you get for a response Good luck, and let us know how it...
by SARubin
May 6th, 2023, 5:05 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Aspiring Email Marketing Copywriter in Need of Guidance"
Replies: 4
Views: 13727

Re: Aspiring Email Marketing Copywriter in Need of Guidance"

Hi Judah Nunn, Welcome to the community. Sorry about the delayed welcome, I've been working overtime the past couple months and sometimes days get ahead of me. Since you're interested in email marketing, have you checked out the Email Copywriting section yet? There's some resources over there that c...
by SARubin
April 23rd, 2023, 7:14 pm
Forum: General Copywriting
Topic: Is there another way?
Replies: 11
Views: 41782

Re: Is there another way?

Hello again! I've spent few hours yesterday on doing market research for one River Cruise companies. I'm in the industry for as long as four and half years and I know some things about them, but when it comes to something like this I have no idea if it's correct. I will attach the Market Research h...
by SARubin
April 21st, 2023, 7:16 pm
Forum: General Copywriting
Topic: Is there another way?
Replies: 11
Views: 41782

Re: Is there another way?

I haven't sent many, just 2 until now, I started to do this few days ago, and between my work and taking the copywriting course, I had time to rewrite 2 copies and send them. OK, you're off to a start. You have an upwork profile... you joined this forum... and you sent out your first emails. That's...
by SARubin
April 21st, 2023, 4:45 pm
Forum: General Copywriting
Topic: Is there another way?
Replies: 11
Views: 41782

Re: Is there another way?

Social media can be a very useful tool, I know, but I don’t really want to be thinking everyday about “Oh! What topic should I write about today?” As a person I speak a lot (and think a lot too), and I like to write (by hand mainly), but when it comes to creating a topic on some social media, my he...
by SARubin
April 19th, 2023, 10:06 pm
Forum: Copy Reviews and Feedback
Topic: Can you give me a review on my copy? Thank you!
Replies: 4
Views: 7227

Re: Can you give me a review on my copy? Thank you!

This is pretty good product description copy, Relu. Get this in front of the right market, add a picture of the wallet and a "buy now" button, and you should have no problem selling some wallets. This is the kind of copy you might want to test for your own copywriting business, or your upw...
by SARubin
April 19th, 2023, 9:51 pm
Forum: Beginners Area
Topic: Niche Selection
Replies: 6
Views: 11476

Re: Niche Selection

Thank you for the response! Would you like to rate my profile on UpWork? I sent some proposals and it seems that it’s not working and I was wondering maybe is something wrong with my profile. Thank you! upwork.com/freelancers/~01a0c6bcbfb59ff843 Hi Relu, I don't know much about upwork because I've ...
by SARubin
April 17th, 2023, 9:54 am
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Hello Everyone!
Replies: 6
Views: 7208

Re: Hello Everyone!

Hello Relu,
Welcome to the copywriters forum.

Feel free to have a look around, and join any of the conversations.

All the best,
Steve
by SARubin
April 16th, 2023, 9:41 am
Forum: General Copywriting
Topic: I can communicate telepathically with you
Replies: 4
Views: 5228

Re: I can communicate telepathically with you

A simple yet extremely powerful exercise to get your brain in control to create is to make a word list. Literally any words that come to mind. Duck, balloon, ice cream, gum, shoe, clown, elephant, videogame, finance, pen, singer, water… Draw two of these words and try to think of different relation...
by SARubin
April 14th, 2023, 9:31 pm
Forum: General Copywriting
Topic: I can communicate telepathically with you
Replies: 4
Views: 5228

Re: I can communicate telepathically with you

Good stuff. I enjoyed reading it from start to finish... I especially like how you closed the "crazy" loop at the end. ''There's a skinny cat on the rocking chair. He stares fixedly at his favorite toy: a little green ball that is on the round table. When reading this sentence above, maybe...
by SARubin
April 10th, 2023, 10:55 am
Forum: Website Copywriting
Topic: What tactic would you use to fill a doctor's appointment book?
Replies: 10
Views: 16083

Re: Qual tática você usaria para preencher a agenda de consultas médicas?

I have a feeling that the Boardroom wanted to hide him. The story I heard was that the owner of Boardroom (Marty Edelston) wanted to keep Mel Martin as his personal secret weapon. He paid Mel a lot of money, and gave him part ownership in the company, so he would never want to leave. And he kept Me...
by SARubin
April 9th, 2023, 6:57 pm
Forum: Writing Mindset
Topic: Syntax and Context in Copywriting
Replies: 5
Views: 17640

Re: Syntax and Context in Copywriting

"Let's eat grandma" vs. "Let's eat, grandma" The addition of a comma completely changes the meaning of the sentence. Without the comma, it sounds like the speaker is suggesting cannibalism. With the comma, it's a harmless invitation to share a meal with grandma. As you can see, ...
by SARubin
April 9th, 2023, 6:47 pm
Forum: Website Copywriting
Topic: What tactic would you use to fill a doctor's appointment book?
Replies: 10
Views: 16083

Re: What tactic would you use to fill a doctor's appointment book?

The truth is, honestly... I don't even know how to thank you for all the value generated here. Feel my sincere gratitude. You are very welcome my friend. I'm happy to be even a small part of your future success. I think that from writing the Mel Martin copies by hand that were left by you in the Do...
by SARubin
April 8th, 2023, 2:55 pm
Forum: Writing Techniques
Topic: This Copywriting Tactic Increases Conversions
Replies: 3
Views: 12958

Re: This Copywriting Tactic Increases Conversions

I think both approaches can be effective depending on the audience and the product being advertised. Yes, I absolutely agree. That's one reason why I'm such a big fan of split testing - because only the market can decide which one works better. For the prepper copy I mentioned above I thought the f...
by SARubin
April 8th, 2023, 9:32 am
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Greetings from a newbie
Replies: 3
Views: 5376

Re: Greetings from a newbie

Hi jamulim, Welcome to the copywriters forum. I'm happy you chose to join us :D and I'm looking forward to exchanging copywriting tips and tricks with you. Feel free to have a look around and let us know what you think. All the best, Steve Hi everyone, Just found this copywriting forum and am happy ...
by SARubin
April 8th, 2023, 9:17 am
Forum: Website Copywriting
Topic: What tactic would you use to fill a doctor's appointment book?
Replies: 10
Views: 16083

Re: What tactic would you use to fill a doctor's appointment book?

Hi Luiz, It looks like you're off to a good start with your plan. Starting with lead generation ads, and then impressing the doctors with your knowledge of their business (on your blog), and your ability to get them more clients, is a solid start to a good strategy. As Franklin mentioned, it will pr...
by SARubin
March 31st, 2023, 5:10 pm
Forum: Email Copywriting
Topic: Profit Pulling Email Swipe File
Replies: 1
Views: 4366

Re: Profit Pulling Email Swipe File

Good stuff Franklin,

I'll put a link here for anyone who might not know where the download section is...

Download Section

Also, remember to make sure you're logged in to your account or you won't be able to access any of the downloads.
by SARubin
March 28th, 2023, 1:12 pm
Forum: Writing Techniques
Topic: This Copywriting Tactic Increases Conversions
Replies: 3
Views: 12958

This Copywriting Tactic Increases Conversions

copywriting-tactic.jpg Here's a little copywriting tactic I recently tried for the first time, and it worked, so I thought I'd share it with anyone here who might be interested. This is not a new tactic, I believe I first learned it from Dan Kennedy around 15 years ago, but I never actually split t...
by SARubin
March 28th, 2023, 12:54 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Drowning girl is begging for help
Replies: 3
Views: 6207

Re: Drowning girl is begging for help

Welcome to the forum Owoborode M.R,
We're happy to have you join us.

You mention you'd like some feedback. Are you currently working on a project that you need help with?
by SARubin
March 28th, 2023, 12:51 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself
Topic: Introduction
Replies: 2
Views: 5356

Re: Introduction

Welcome to the copywriters forum Jay,
Happy to have you join us