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CallMeMari
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Rate my work

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Hello to everyone here :)
I'm Mari - beginner of copywriting
I got my first job and I'd like to rate my works please ()<
Is it good for beginner?
https://sudokupro.app/blog
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SARubin
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Hello Mari,
Welcome to the forum :)

I just checked out your blog and I think your writing looks pretty good.
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Franklin
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Hi Mari and welcome,

Your writing looks fine (I read a couple of the posts) but I'm not sure what you want people to do after reading it. Do you want me to download the app? or play the free online version?

I would make the call to action more clearly defined and enticing so people know exactly what to do.

That's just my first thought. Hope it helps.

- F
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CallMeMari
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SARubin wrote: June 10th, 2022, 4:46 pm Hello Mari,
Welcome to the forum :)

I just checked out your blog and I think your writing looks pretty good.
Wow thank you! I wasn't expect it, especially from you =)
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Franklin wrote: June 11th, 2022, 11:30 am Hi Mari and welcome,

Your writing looks fine (I read a couple of the posts) but I'm not sure what you want people to do after reading it. Do you want me to download the app? or play the free online version?

I would make the call to action more clearly defined and enticing so people know exactly what to do.

That's just my first thought. Hope it helps.

- F
Actually you are right I will recheck my approach to posts. Big thank you! :)/
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