Clickbank Weight Loss Offer For Men Email (Feedback appreciated)

[LucasCepeda]

Hi guys,

I will keep trying to see if i can get some feedback on my copy.
I am writing everyday as you see and trying to become better.

This time I wrote for another top 10 clickbank offer in the weight loss niche.

From:Men In Charge
SL: From the 98% to the top 2% (Here’s how YOU belong to the winning group)

From:Men In Charge
SL: This secret health trick puts you in the 2% of winning men

From:Men In Charge
SL: Are you in the 2% of men in charge of their health? (Crazy Stats)

From:Men In Charge
SL: Suffering from “chronic dieters” diseasediease? (This is how to stop!)


Dear friend…


According to a research conducted with over 1000 men….

When it comes to being in charge of their fitness and health…

Only 2% are winning the battle…

That’s 20 men from 1000!

The rest…?

They keep stuck and struggling from what we like to call “Chronic dieters” disease…

You know the drill…

The one where you blindly follow the diet gurus like a lost sheep…

The one where you feel like you start out strong, confident…

…and then suddenly makes you feel trapped…

The one that makes you think…

“ Can losing weight really be this complicated? “

But here’s the good news.

What If I told you…NO…It doesnt…

And I can share with you the ONE simple secret health trick that is..

Putting men back on top…

And in charge of their fitness and health for good…

Making them look good and admired by family and friends…

Would you be interested?

If you ANSWERED yes…

⇒ Here’s how you can jump over to the winning side and belong in the 2% group for good.


To your success,
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