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I'm new to copywriting and would like some feedback, please
Posted: June 12th, 2025, 11:16 pm
by i8abyte
Hi, I'm just starting out in copywriting and have just made my very first advertisement. Can I please have some feedback on it? I would very much appreciate it.
https://drive.proton.me/urls/2Y4MK4XFGR#YjCKvMINoJtU
Re: I'm new to copywriting and would like some feedback, please
Posted: June 16th, 2025, 9:16 am
by SARubin
I think it looks OK for a first try but it's a bit generic.
Can you give us a reason to buy from you, instead of someone else?
Even a couple of words can make a difference. Something like "Our custom suit and tie" might make people wonder what makes yours different from every other suit and tie. And that alone might get people to click the ad. (curiosity gets clicks)
Keep trying and you'll get there.
All the best,
Steven