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Rate my work
Hello to everyone here
I'm Mari - beginner of copywriting
I got my first job and I'd like to rate my works please
Is it good for beginner?
sudokupro.app/blog
I'm Mari - beginner of copywriting
I got my first job and I'd like to rate my works please
Is it good for beginner?
sudokupro.app/blog
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Re: Rate my work
Hello Mari,
Welcome to the forum
I just checked out your blog and I think your writing looks pretty good.
Welcome to the forum
I just checked out your blog and I think your writing looks pretty good.
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SARubin - Direct Response Copywriter / Conversion Flow Expert
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Re: Rate my work
Hi Mari and welcome,
Your writing looks fine (I read a couple of the posts) but I'm not sure what you want people to do after reading it. Do you want me to download the app? or play the free online version?
I would make the call to action more clearly defined and enticing so people know exactly what to do.
That's just my first thought. Hope it helps.
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Your writing looks fine (I read a couple of the posts) but I'm not sure what you want people to do after reading it. Do you want me to download the app? or play the free online version?
I would make the call to action more clearly defined and enticing so people know exactly what to do.
That's just my first thought. Hope it helps.
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Re: Rate my work
Actually you are right I will recheck my approach to posts. Big thank you!Franklin wrote: ↑June 11th, 2022, 11:30 am Hi Mari and welcome,
Your writing looks fine (I read a couple of the posts) but I'm not sure what you want people to do after reading it. Do you want me to download the app? or play the free online version?
I would make the call to action more clearly defined and enticing so people know exactly what to do.
That's just my first thought. Hope it helps.
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Re: Rate my work
I Loved it - Well Done
I'd be very happy as a client to receive this as your finished work
Question from a newbie "How many people were involved in the finished item? or did you do all of the website building yourself?"
I'd be very happy as a client to receive this as your finished work
Question from a newbie "How many people were involved in the finished item? or did you do all of the website building yourself?"
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