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Can you give me a review on my copy? Thank you!

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Hey Guys! Would you mind giving me a feedback on the copy I've written for a minimalist design wallet?
Thank you!

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I like it !3
it's very descriptive if I needed a wallet I would want to get one.
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WordyWordpecker wrote: April 19th, 2023, 11:04 am I like it !3
it's very descriptive if I needed a wallet I would want to get one.
Thank you! Wouldn’t expect that 😊
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Re: Can you give me a review on my copy? Thank you!

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This is pretty good product description copy, Relu.

Get this in front of the right market, add a picture of the wallet and a "buy now" button, and you should have no problem selling some wallets.

This is the kind of copy you might want to test for your own copywriting business, or your upwork profile page (With a few word changes)...
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SARubin wrote: April 19th, 2023, 10:06 pm This is pretty good product description copy, Relu.

Get this in front of the right market, add a picture of the wallet and a "buy now" button, and you should have no problem selling some wallets.

This is the kind of copy you might want to test for your own copywriting business, or your upwork profile page (With a few word changes)...
Are you ready for the copywriter that can keep up with your business? I think you are!
If you are thinking about customer engagement and conversions. Count on me!
Thanks to my 110% guarantee, you can trust that your copy will keep money pouring into your bank account for years to come.
It might not work, but it could be worth split testing to see what kind of results you get
Thank you very much!
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