River Cruise Copy

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Relu Iulian
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River Cruise Copy

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Hello, people!

In the last week I've researched and stalked most of the European river cruise companies and slowly I will start to share with you my work.

Today starting with the first one.

I would appreciate if you could give me an opinion on this. They' re made for facebook and/ or instagram.

Thank you!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/13E5 ... sp=sharing
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Re: River Cruise Copy

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On the first two ads I would leave off the price - 856€

Let prospects click the ad to visit the cruise ship website first, then they can see the full value of the offer along side the price tag.
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