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Posted: August 28th, 2023, 2:09 pm
The target audience are the people who find it difficult to carry items in a small or medium sized bag and have to carry large bags even for short trips
Please tell me how can i write a better subject line than this and how can think more like a customer than a seller
How to carry more items in less space
Hi <name>,
Imagine yourself going on a trip with friends and you have a large bag but it has only few things
Wouldn’t it be embarrassing when your friends will say we are only going for a few days not to settle there
What will make it worse is that it won’t fit everywhere, so handling it will be tiresome
But what if you have bag which genuinely contains good no. of things and is not that much big
And also have cool designs and aesthetics to make your friends envious and is easy to handle
So to make your expectations to reality we have our new SAFARI BACKPACKS
To make your traveling easy
Our new bag has several new features
• It has multiple compartments to keep your things organized and easily accessible which means you don’t have to make a mess to find a single item
• It has water resistant and rain cover your bag won’t get wet which means your accessories will be safe even on rainy days
• It has variety of designs which means you have lot of choices and select from it and make your friends envy you
• It has adjustable straps which distributes weights equally on shoulders, chest, waist which means you won’t have all the burden on your back
• It ventilation and padding to promote airflow which means you won’t have sweaty back after a long journey
If you order within 24 hrs you will get 10% off on any backpack you choose
>>>>PLACE ORDER<<<<<
Please tell me how can i write a better subject line than this and how can think more like a customer than a seller
How to carry more items in less space
Hi <name>,
Imagine yourself going on a trip with friends and you have a large bag but it has only few things
Wouldn’t it be embarrassing when your friends will say we are only going for a few days not to settle there
What will make it worse is that it won’t fit everywhere, so handling it will be tiresome
But what if you have bag which genuinely contains good no. of things and is not that much big
And also have cool designs and aesthetics to make your friends envious and is easy to handle
So to make your expectations to reality we have our new SAFARI BACKPACKS
To make your traveling easy
Our new bag has several new features
• It has multiple compartments to keep your things organized and easily accessible which means you don’t have to make a mess to find a single item
• It has water resistant and rain cover your bag won’t get wet which means your accessories will be safe even on rainy days
• It has variety of designs which means you have lot of choices and select from it and make your friends envy you
• It has adjustable straps which distributes weights equally on shoulders, chest, waist which means you won’t have all the burden on your back
• It ventilation and padding to promote airflow which means you won’t have sweaty back after a long journey
If you order within 24 hrs you will get 10% off on any backpack you choose
>>>>PLACE ORDER<<<<<