[Critique Needed] Ad copy for web design agency
Posted: April 20th, 2024, 7:34 pm
Context: The copy is for a Facebook ad for a web design agency looking to start up conversations with potential customers and get them to book a call or just sign them as a client through the DMs.
Ad Headline: Get A Unique Website For A Crazily Low Price.
Ad Headline 2: Crazily Upgrade Your Small Biz with a $149 website
Ad Headline 3: This $149 Website Will 2X Your Biz Revenue
Body copy:
Can't reach potential customers outside your local area as a small business owner?
Or have you been struggling to put yourself out there and generate consistent leads and sales for your business?
Or you don't know how to position your business as an authority in your niche so you can get buyers who trust you?
For real, we know what it's like.
It can be frustrating.
It can make you feel overwhelmed, stuck and like you're failing in business.
As you work harder, later, earlier, longer, on your biz…
You still are not satisfied with the results you're getting.
But don't get sad…
Because we have something huge for ya.
Perhaps it's “a way”...
A way to escape the never ending struggle to reach a wider audience.
A way to generate consistent traffic, leads, and sales for your business.
A way to show your credibility to potential customers.
A way to tap into “online money” in your small business.
A way to become unique and stand out from your competitors.
So what's this way?
A uniquely-designed and high-converting website.
Yeah, that's right.
I've not seen anyone get a quality website and then regret having it (because it works).
You see, at Top Web Design US, our goal is to make you a website that oozes professionalism and speaks highly of your brand.
And all you have to do to get us to help you with the website…
Is to click the "Send Message” button below this ad and send us a message and we'd talk about how we could help you.
And again, we're only doing this for a ridiculously low price of $149 for a very short time.
We're planning to increase the price soon (cos people literally do this for $2k).
Which is why you should hurry up and send us a DM now to talk about how we can help you with a great website.
See you in the DMs.
Ad Headline: Get A Unique Website For A Crazily Low Price.
Ad Headline 2: Crazily Upgrade Your Small Biz with a $149 website
Ad Headline 3: This $149 Website Will 2X Your Biz Revenue
Body copy:
Can't reach potential customers outside your local area as a small business owner?
Or have you been struggling to put yourself out there and generate consistent leads and sales for your business?
Or you don't know how to position your business as an authority in your niche so you can get buyers who trust you?
For real, we know what it's like.
It can be frustrating.
It can make you feel overwhelmed, stuck and like you're failing in business.
As you work harder, later, earlier, longer, on your biz…
You still are not satisfied with the results you're getting.
But don't get sad…
Because we have something huge for ya.
Perhaps it's “a way”...
A way to escape the never ending struggle to reach a wider audience.
A way to generate consistent traffic, leads, and sales for your business.
A way to show your credibility to potential customers.
A way to tap into “online money” in your small business.
A way to become unique and stand out from your competitors.
So what's this way?
A uniquely-designed and high-converting website.
Yeah, that's right.
I've not seen anyone get a quality website and then regret having it (because it works).
You see, at Top Web Design US, our goal is to make you a website that oozes professionalism and speaks highly of your brand.
And all you have to do to get us to help you with the website…
Is to click the "Send Message” button below this ad and send us a message and we'd talk about how we could help you.
And again, we're only doing this for a ridiculously low price of $149 for a very short time.
We're planning to increase the price soon (cos people literally do this for $2k).
Which is why you should hurry up and send us a DM now to talk about how we can help you with a great website.
See you in the DMs.