Relu Iulian wrote: ↑April 21st, 2023, 5:03 pm
I haven't sent many, just 2 until now, I started to do this few days ago, and between my work and taking the copywriting course, I had time to rewrite 2 copies and send them.
OK, you're off to a start.
You have an upwork profile... you joined this forum... and you sent out your first emails.
That's a great start, it's already more than what a lot of people ever do.
Although at this point in your journey I believe it's only wise to set some proper expectations, so you don't get too disappointment too quickly and decide to quit.
These things take time to work (or a lot of money for mass exposure), and sending 2 emails is not really marketing...
We could maybe call it "practice"?
We need to add at least a couple of zeros to the end of that number before we can hope for a measurable response.
The first thing I would do in your shoes is spend some of your free time doing a bit of stalking. Nothing weird, just some market research on your ideal clients.
For example: You say the river cruise ships don't do advertising?
Why not?
Do you believe they would welcome more customers? Or do they already have as many customers as they can handle?
These are the first questions we need to ask.
If they could use more, that could be an opening to get your foot in the door. And we build your offer around that need.
My best advice for you right now, Relu, is...
Over the next couple weeks, pick a few businesses that you know you can help with their advertising (you can start with as few as 10, but the more the merrier).
Give each one a separate folder on your computer, or a separate file in your desk drawer.
Then...
Stalk the companies on social for a little while. You don't need to engage right away, you just want to learn about them. Take notes.
Visit their website if they have one, check for any reviews about the companies or the products.
What do they talk about? See if you can pick up on any of their values as a company.
Find out as much as you can about the culture of the people and the company itself, because whatever it is they care about is what you try to connect to with your offer.
And most important, find out who's in charge, and get their email address.
Once you've armed yourself with this knowledge you can begin to craft an email template (draft) to introduce yourself to them.
As the saying goes... First seek to understand,
then seek to be understood.
Relu Iulian wrote: ↑April 21st, 2023, 5:03 pmThe first one was the Wallet copy which you have reviewed
Yeah, I though that copy was pretty good. It's hard to get excited about a wallet but you made it work
Relu Iulian wrote: ↑April 21st, 2023, 5:03 pmAnd as the contact email, I am looking if they have some office email, business, or collaboration emails, if not, I am sending to what I can find as form of contact.
Just a heads up... 95% of the time, unsolicited sales pitches coming through a contact form on a website will be treated as spam. Either by the server or by the person who gets it in their inbox.
It's better to stick with personal email addresses of the people running the show. When you build rapport with those people you can bypass all the gatekeepers.
But first, pick a dozen businesses that look like your ideal client and find out what you can about the companiy and the people in it.
One step at a time, right? Onward and upward...
All the best,
Steve