Feedback Appreciated!

[LucasCepeda]

Hi everyone

I just joined the forum hoping to learn a ton from all the valuable threads I have already seen posted here.

I have recently started writing on my own to see if I my writing has any potential.

I decided to maybe become a writer in the financial market and was wondering if anyone could give me just some feedback on a few emails I wrote? I am not looking for copy feedback per se.

Thiese emails I wrote today in 15 minutes came out of inspiration.

I just would love to know what you guys think.

Again, just to know if my writing has any potential or not.

My mother tongue is spanish, english is after german my third language...

P.s: These emails don^t promote anything specific. I just wrote them for the sake of writing them.

Hope this is ok to post here.

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SL: Ready To Blast Off (Don't miss this!)


Dear reader...

There is a brand new opportunity the likes we have never seen before...

This opportunity is predicted to blast off really really soon...

The last time something this BIG happened was around 1954...

This time, due to the soaring amount of wealth being thrown into this MARKET...

The expectations are HUGE...

Like 10 times bigger than in 1954...

In fact companies the likes of google, facebook and amazon are already
jumping all over it...

Even trust funds and big banking cartels are desperatly buying thousands and
thousands of shares...

They know the impact this market is about to have on the economy is
astronomical...

And if you are ahead of the curve...

You can also profit from this opportunity waiting for you...

But you need to act fast...

This informations is time-sensitive...

Nobody can predict when this will happen...

However financial analysts estimate it could be in the next 10 days...

Don^t get left behind...

Check this out:
===> Ready To Blast Off (Brand new opportunity!)

And remember you will NOT hear about this anywhere else but on the link above.

Anyone in the known about it is keeping their mouths shut...

Get in while you can!

Talk soon,
Market Wealth Dynamics


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RE: A 143% ROI in 3 days and growing! (Did you see it?)


Dear reader


About 3 days ago...

A brand new astronomical opportunity was sent our way...

The few insiders that were informed before hand have already seen
a massive 143% increase in ROI in just 3 days...

And this is NOTHING compared to what is about to happen in the next 30 days...

This tiny stock that just went live is about to explode and grow
at least another 456% in the next 10 days...

And... is expected to soar another 1345% in the next 45 days...

Analysts are calling this tiny company a revolutionary breakthrough in
the medical sector...

By the time the public knows about this it will be arleady too late...

If you act now you can still profit from this massive growth about
to happen NOW.

Check this out:

===> 143% ROI in 3 days

Unfortunately this is a matter of precisely timing the market...

And the timing has to be now if you dont want to miss out.

If you DONT catch this wave right now your profit potential could diminish
rather fast...

This NEWS require your immediate attention to make as much money as you can.

Do not MISS OUT on this.

Here's your link again:

==> 143% ROI in 3 days


Talk soon,
Money Market Daily


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RE: Your portfolio is about to SKYROCKET


Dear friend,


Have you heard the NEWS about this medical breakthrough?

Are you trading stocks in the medical market?

Is your portfoliio positioned properly for what is about to happen?

If you haven't we highly recommend you check this out

==> Your portfolio is about to SKYROCKET

This is a time sensitive opportunity.

News about this revolutionary medical breakthrough are about to go public...

And once the news are out...

If you were lucky enough to get in early...like today...

So is your chance to profit as much as 2456% in the next 10 days.

BE WARNED.

Nobody is going to let you in on this cheap stock.

What are you planning to do?

GEt left behind again?

Don't do that, do this instead

Check this out:
==>> Your portfolio is about to SKYROCKET

To your success,
Daily Money Meditations


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RE: This tiny pharmaceutical company is about to skyrocket!


Dear friend,

We are comign to you today to give you a heads up ahead of what is about
to happen...

If you are receiving this email today, consider yourself lucky.

A tiny new pharmaceutical company is about to go public.

And when it does the stock will skyrocket...

Experst are saying this is the medical breakthrough of the century...

You heard that right...

This tiny company is about to revolutionize a market with new never-seen-before
technology...

And when it does, this company will become a trillion dollar behemoth...

We know it sounds like a stretch...

But you have to see this for yourself before its too late.

Smart investors are already jumping on the bandwagon fast.

And so should you if you want your portfolio to skyrocket before the news get published...

Check this out

==> This tiny pharmaceutical company is about to skyrocket


SEe you soon,
Medical Money News


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RE: Stocks Are About To Plummet Drastically (Watch out)


Dear reader

We are about to whitness a market crash unlike the markets have ever seen before..

It is incredibleto see so many market insiders selling all their bags...

Liquidating their portfolios...

And sellilng their homes in droves...

Nothing like we have seen in years...

The reason things are about to implode are what this email is about...

We have created a special report we want you to read for free.

Please be careful...

If you do not act soon...

You may lose it all.

We are warning you.

Make sure to secure your investments this week before its too late.

Go here to find out more:

==>> Stocks Are About To Plummet Drastically

We hope you find this email in time before markets collapse.

To your success,
Market News Daily


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P.S If you read all these emails I highly appreciate YOU!

p.p.s I am looking to help anyone that thinks my writing has potential with some emails, just to get feedback and learn the skill faster. If you think I can help, please let me know!

Sincerely
Lucas

[Franklin]

I think they look good. They're quick and punchy with just enough drama. I don't know the financial market tho so I can't say how well they would work.

-F

[LucasCepeda]

Hello again Franklin!

Thank you.

Again, I was just wondering again if my writing skills are any good or I should go to programming instead jajaja...

Sincerely
Lucas