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Hey guys, I'm hoping to find a community of like minded copywriters that I can grow along side with. I write everyday and try to get at least 3 emails out a day. The only problem I'm having is that I don't have a mentor or community around me that can help me imporove or give feedback on my work.

Here's an example of my work I finished today. Any help or reviews would do wonders!

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SJ: Dietitians and Nutritionists Recommend This For Weight Loss…

Ahoy there!

So I was sitting in my lounge room the other day reading over a fitness magazine. It had professional dietitians and world class nurtitionists discussing the struggles people have losing weight modern day.

I was quite surprised, they were saying its not just the food that we choose to put in our bodies and that that was the main thing being blamed.

Instead they said it was things like living busy modern lives, not having enough time to do shopping let along cooking delicious and nutritious meals.

One dietician even went as far as to point out that sugars where the main thing distorting most people’s bodies and that they didn’t even know they were eating them most of them.

Imagine that, you’re trying to eat healthy but you have no time and when you eventually do make “good” decisions about what you eat there’s hidden sugars in it anyway.

And then you’re left wondering why no matter what you do you simply can’t lose weight.

I’ve heard the stories, I’ve had friends with weight problems.

The disrespect you get from people in the public, the fact that you want to go to gym and train to fix your body but you’re too embarrassed to turn up in the first place, the rejection from the opposite sex, the self esteem issues when you look in the mirror.

I’ve heard them!

Personally I never understood why those people didn’t just get on a meal plan kit. I mean there’s alot of meal plan kits that specifically say they don’t use sugar, are correctly portiened to lose weight and have a large variety of chef cooked meals to choose from so you don’t even feel like you’re dieting.

My friend used this one and started losing 1kg a week consistently and she didn’t even feel like she was dieting or in a “Fitness phase” at all.

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“Free of nasties” she told me, I didn’t even know what that meant until I did some research. It means that the meals have no unhealthy fats or hidden sugars.

Sounds easy because it really is.

Cheer’s

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Andrew