I wrote my first sales page a while back featuring a copywriting course as a practice/portfolio piece. It would be real helpful if you could take some time out to go through it and share your honest feedback. I’m quite average at designing so I’ve kept the overall layout simple. Let me know your brutally honest thoughts. Thanks a lot in advance

Disclaimer: Since this is a practice piece and based on a fictional product, I couldn’t add any testimonials. My goal here is to basically know how is the overall writing style and the correctness of the format followed.